Now that I have the time to make an adequate comment...because I was a bit too stunned to say anything at the time I first saw this.

So far...-checks email-...she hasn't responded to my review (then again, what I told her about the consequences of rape as a plot device wasn't pleasant), but I'll keep an eye out to see if she does at least make the attempt to edit her work. It's the least she could do from all the criticism we gave her. =/ If not...I will be strongly inclined to mourn for humanity.