ext_159067 ([identity profile] bluefate.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] askerian 2007-01-06 06:08 pm (UTC)

grammar: in the second paragraph "Neji won't, too." should be 'either' instead of 'too' since you're agreeing with a negation.
Ahah...when Naruto falls for someone, he falls hard, doesn't he?
It's almost dreamlike.

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