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askerian ([personal profile] askerian) wrote2006-10-13 04:49 pm

naruto - Team Gai ficlet



Neji didn't need to tilt his head back to really appreciate the size of the cliff looming overhead. He did it anyway. For emphasis.

"You want us to climb this."

Gai beamed. "Of course! It's a good exercise, mobilizing many more groups of muscles than are routinely used in tree-walking and sparring."

Neji gave the cliff another look. It looked awfully smooth from down there, and it was a little damp from the breeze that carried a fine mist from the nearby waterfall. "Without chakra?"

"Of course! It is wise to prepare for all sorts of eventualities, after all."

"Do you mean like chakra-detection traps?" Tenten asked, tapping the flat of a three-pronged pick against her palm thoughtfully.

"That also! But several villages, such as the Hidden Rock Village, have several chakra draining techniques."

The three teenagers stood in silence for a few seconds, exchanging serious looks. Earth Country had been behaving conspicuously for the last months; apparently, their teacher believed it might escalate.

"In this case," Neji sighed, and found a roll of bandages in his bag.

His teammates watched him in puzzled silence as he blindfolded himself.

"... Neji?"

"If I have no chakra, then I can't see," Neji replied grimly as he smoothed his hair so that the bandages didn't tug. He had trained to be able to fight without an arm -- without a leg, even, alone and outnumbered; this wasn't too different. It would be quite unpleasant, but he didn't believe in sparing himself.

After a few seconds, Tenten chuckled softly. "As if you couldn't cheat with us none the wiser, if you wanted to," she teased.

"Tenten!" Lee protested, as Neji made his way to the cliff cautiously and felt the rock for cracks. "I'm sure Neji would never cheat, especially on such a noble and perilous self-imposed challenge!"

Neji heard a zipper sound behind him, and the ruffling sounds of someone moving their belongings around in their bag. "Of course he wouldn't," Tenten commented cheerfully. "Here, you hold onto that for me. Neji? What do you think of giving Lee our bags, so he has a little handicap of his own?"

Neji shrugged, and let his sailor bag slide off his shoulder. "That works."

She took it from his hand; the grass whispered under Lee's feet when he stepped closer to take it.

"Now, Lee, I'm trusting you! My best blades and chains are in those scrolls."

"YES MA'AM! I will guard your bags like my own life!"

Neji snorted, and Tenten swallowed a cough.

"... Even better than my own life. I promise!"

Turning to face the cliff more fully, Neji smiled faintly. Lee with some extra weight, Tenten without her weapons -- he still thought he had the worst part of the bargain. But training was supposed to prepare them to deal with unsavory possibilities, after all.

"My students are so admirable! Taking on such handicaps -- here, Lee! You may carry my bag also."

Gai's hand landed heavily on Neji's shoulder, startling him; but he was too proud to flinch. Behind and a little to the left, Lee was juggling Tenten's, Neji's and Gai's bags -- which contained, on top of standard belongings, the tent, a first aid kit, and many, many training weights.

"Go forth, my beloved students, and conquer this mountaintop! Your glorious teamwork and youthful enthusiasm will carry you to victory!"

Chuckling, Tenten brushed past Neji, her sandals scratching softly against the stone. "I'll open the way."

Neji waited a little to leave her some space to maneuver, and then, finding a few cracks as a support, slowly followed the noises she made. He knew Lee would stay under him, ready to catch him if he fell. Enhanced strength and familiarity with chakra-less movement or not, Lee would no doubt fall, too, if Neji landed on him; but then, this was why they had Gai.

Not that Neji would fall. He might have the worst part of the bargain, but that didn't mean he wasn't fully able to deal with it on his own anyway.

"Left," Tenten commented cheerfully. "Two hands' width up from your shoulder."

Neji found the handhold, pulled his weight up. Under him, Lee followed, assiduously counting the distance they'd covered.

He didn't need his teammates; but sometimes it wasn't too horrible to have them anyway.

[identity profile] sintari.livejournal.com 2006-10-13 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my sweet Neji! *___* Loved this, Asuka!

[identity profile] sintari.livejournal.com 2006-10-14 06:14 pm (UTC)(link)
>_>

Oh baby, Naruto fandom and I are sort of in a trial separation period. But I'll totally try if a bunny strikes me! Promise! *torn*

[identity profile] scorpionocean.livejournal.com 2006-10-13 05:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Neji! ♥ we clearly need more Neji in the manga. Hell more Team Gai anyway

[identity profile] schuldlos85.livejournal.com 2006-10-13 05:09 pm (UTC)(link)
adorable!!!!
gai and lee are sooo cute when they're getting overexcited over things like mountain climbing! ^^
it's good to see neji trusting his teammates!

[identity profile] beachlass.livejournal.com 2006-10-13 05:21 pm (UTC)(link)
That last line so perfectly captures my feelings about working in teams. Lovely.

[identity profile] chibirisuchan.livejournal.com 2006-10-13 05:24 pm (UTC)(link)
you know, I never did understand why Neji put up with Lee and Gai long enough to stay on the same team -- but this makes it make sense... Neji's mature enough to see the method in Gai's madness the way Sasuke and Naruto really couldn't have seen it, and Lee doesn't even think of it as madness to begin with, so it doesn't matter that he doesn't see. ^_~ And Tenten's all about targeting the loopholes in an instant...

two thumbs up here!

[identity profile] des-butterfly.livejournal.com 2006-10-13 05:59 pm (UTC)(link)
I love how Neji knows that Lee will catch him and knows that Gai will catch them both if they fall. It's a level of trust you somehow wouldn't expect Neji to have, except he's worked with his team so long he kind of has to have that by now.

[identity profile] artimusdin.livejournal.com 2006-10-13 06:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Eeee *grins* I <3 Neji in this. And Tenten! Not useless! omgyay! Lee! So helpful, and yet kickass! <333
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[identity profile] artimusdin.livejournal.com 2006-10-13 10:12 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks ^^ The creator did an awesome job, ne? *pets it*

[identity profile] artimusdin.livejournal.com 2006-10-14 05:31 pm (UTC)(link)
She looks like she should be, yes, but going with their usual way of treating kunoichi, well... yeah. Then again, she's on Neji and Gai's team, and they wouldn't take anything but competance in the area of choice.

[identity profile] heron-advocate.livejournal.com 2006-10-13 06:21 pm (UTC)(link)
LOLOMG I love this. Lee was great (as always), and Neji was his regular bitchy self, denying that he would have feelings for anyone, ever. LOVE! ♥

[identity profile] kineko.livejournal.com 2006-10-13 08:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Suka, je t'aime. très beaucoup très fort. Cette fic est géniale *-* tu as le don pour trouver le petit truc qui fait voir les persos totalement différement et que ca marche mieux que dans l'original.

(Anonymous) 2006-10-13 08:07 pm (UTC)(link)
That was so cool! It fits them all perfectly! I love the whole guard with my life bit. Only thing was were they on grass or stone? Because the grass whispered under Lee but Tenten scratched stone.

Random lurky person

[identity profile] arinan.livejournal.com 2006-10-14 02:03 am (UTC)(link)
I think they were standing on grass and Ten Ten scratches the stone of the cliff they're going to climb.

[identity profile] thursday-kat.livejournal.com 2006-10-13 08:50 pm (UTC)(link)
oh yayness for neji! lovely little piece, says so much about team gai and their dynamics etc. did i mention neji rocks? he does :)

[identity profile] spiralingvortex.livejournal.com 2006-10-13 10:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay! Neji-ish centric fic. You made it fit so well.
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[personal profile] qem_chibati 2006-10-14 12:08 am (UTC)(link)
I really liked this, it's very insightful for Neji.

[identity profile] elfiepike.livejournal.com 2006-10-14 01:10 am (UTC)(link)
ohhh, team gai is love. ♥ ♥ ♥

[identity profile] ithilgwath.livejournal.com 2006-10-14 04:16 am (UTC)(link)
mmmm very nice. The levels of trust and teamwork expressed in their actions is wonderful. Even if they are exasperated by each other, they still have such a level of understanding. Neji's practicality forcing him to take such a handicap and the other two automatically take one too.

I absolutely love Neji's awareness that if he falls, and takes Lee with him because he KNOWS there's no way Lee would just let him drop, that their Sensei is down there ready to catch them.

Just... Love. I love this fic SO much. So much. and it's so short but it says so much about their relationship. *snuggles you*

!SQUEE! Team Gai drabble

(Anonymous) 2006-10-14 03:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I think this drabble shows excellent characterization of a team that really understands its members. I particularly like Gai's not-so-subtle-but-subtle-enough hints about Hidden Rock; Neji's overwhelming practicality (Neji - chakra = blind...never thought that through, but that's why you are here, oh logical one); Lee's belief in his team's honorable nature and taking on way more than he should; and Tenten on point - handicapped without her weapons but knowing that she's better off than both of the others.

Now I'll just get back to my corner to gush quietly over the rare Team Gai drabble. Pardonnez-moi.

Re: !SQUEE! Team Gai drabble

(Anonymous) 2006-10-14 03:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Btw - do I sense that Neji has a fear of heights? Not a great fear, just a squeegee teeny weeny mincey li'l bit?

Just got that impression. Right, corner, back I go.