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[askerian]

Okay yes i've been an evil cranky bitch these last days. Thwap if you see me be an unfair bitch plz; as for the rest plz ignore. I'll just try to keep deleting the wank before it splurges on my LJ.



It doesn't help that I've had the most evilest bunny ever for Cercle, my original story, and I don't want to write it ever. noooo. it has Reiyel dying for Aske in a very dramatic way. Story-wise, it's cliche as hell, but it's still making me cry. So. I'm not sure how many people know and care about my ofic, but if they want to suggest drabbles in this universe, it's the moment. (about anyone as well, any of the characters, not only Aske&Rei)

As always -- I'm lazy so I probably won't write many of them, and if I can't see it, I can't write it so there's a chance the drabble won' tbe happening. I just want to stop thinking about that idiot sacrificing himself. damn you, Reiyel. It's not love anymore, it's codependency to the point of psychotic obsession.

... or if anyone wants to chat about the universe or something... *flops*

just in case, yeah, it's the world with the shapeshifting unicorns and the half-angel Mary-Sue. XD


Edit:




This character is half-angel, but he looks like a full one. His current name is Uriel, but I also have an Archangel Uriel, so it doesn't fit. Modifications of Uriel would be good, and possibly names ending in -el, -iel (angel-type names). Though i'm not quite sure his mother is sadistic enough to use an angel name for a kid living around demons. He already looks angelic enough. x__x;;;

... I was thinking Kouriel earlier, but not sure it fits. He's rather stereotypically calm, soft-spoken and patient... (though if you push him far enough he'll tear off your balls smiling XD)

His twin's name is Ashram, their mother is Ashriel. Daddy is Killian. Demon names tend to have lots of sibilants and Ks, though not always... guhh. *flops*



SON OF EDIT:
Bestest rant about Cloud Strife and Sues. Ever. Ever ever ever. Funniest too. I dhed. Seriously, it is made of WORD and WIN.

Comments

[trypton88.livejournal.com]

[lomelinde-sama.livejournal.com]

Childhood thingie with Ashram and Uriel ? A bit of twin-dynamic ?

[askerian]

Ahaha, that's because it's in french. oops? XD;;;;; ♥ Still want it?

[askerian]

Ohh. o_o;; man. Gotta think a bit on this one. Anything in particular?

[askerian]

Hm, gonna assume that it's their "new" home situation, not the one one -- IE, they're not livingonly with their father and mother, but with several family members. Also I want to change Uriel's name a bit... The connection to the archangel is flimsy at best, so... hmmm. ah well, i can edit that later.

[trypton88.livejournal.com]

[lomelinde-sama.livejournal.com]

Since, if I remember well from the character profiles, Ashram is always defending his brother because Uriel (or however you want to call him) doesn't like violence, I think I would love to see Uriel fend for himself, and I keep getting this image of Ashram laughing his ass off and thinking 'told you he doesn't like it. didn't tell you he couldn't do it.'

Or something.

[askerian]

Ahaha, not sure you'll go very far, also fair warning, Alizea is a raging Mary Sue.

http://asukasama.free.fr/archive_original.htm

If you hit the "cercle" tag, though, you get snippets and stuff in english. ;p

[askerian]

heee. That could be fun. Also, totally IC. XD Will try~

[(Anonymous)]

Maybe Reiyel has a nightmare about dying for Askerian in a very dramatic way, and then he wakes up screaming and embarrassed and he bitches at Aske for no good reason and they have a fight that ends in hot sex?

[trypton88.livejournal.com]

[complexphoenix.livejournal.com]

That was me, btw.

[meanne77.livejournal.com]

Tu veux un vrai nom qui existe ? lol. Sinon, je te propose Jaël (le J prononcé à la nordique "ia" bien sûr)

[askerian]

hah. No, the scene is way too detailed for a dream. That's part of my problem; it's too vivid.

Also, Reiyel doesn't bitch at Askerian. XD Hell, he doesn't bitch a lot; he's more the kind of person who enjoys staying calm and aggravating people until they explode. Wen he's pissed, he hides it. XD

[askerian]

J'aime pas trop les sons en ja, désolée :p Nan, le nom a pas besoin d'exister. ^_^

[animeprincess.livejournal.com]

o__o *looks up demons and whatnot...*

Karkotakiel? uhm. (from here: http://www.deliriumsrealm.com/delirium/articleview.asp?Post=305)

and http://www.geocities.com/Heartland/Estates/6913/magicat.htm this site has a good amount of names from mythology.

just plain old Kiel might work, though. ^^;; just my opinion and some references.

[askerian]

Kiel would be very pretty. ^^ The bigger version... bzuh? XD i have to type it, you know. XD

Thanks for the links, hon. ^^

[stripedpetunia.livejournal.com]

Azriel/Azrael is the name of some important angel. ...Okay, Wikipedia says it's a name for the angel of death. But it has an alternate spelling of Ashriel. So. You might have known that, but you might not have. Sounds like an interesting name if you think 'well he's named after his mom, sorta'. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Azrael has a metric fuckton of other spellings of the same thing.

PS. If you ever reattack Cercle in English or French I will attempt to read it. :D *not such a fantasy fan but it depends*

[askerian]

hee. Sadly I already have an Azrael. ;_; In fact, most of the major angel names are taken. Gabriel, Raphael, Michael, Uriel. Then there's Sariel, Azrael and Israfel. (Sariel is an archangel. Azrael = death and Israfel = the one who sounds the trumpet on Judgment Day. I don't know what rank Israfel is "officially", but I liked the name. 'sides, it's not a religious story. *ponders*)

(oh and yeah, Lucifer is there too. XD)

yay! ♥ (but really, it's a story for romantic 14 year olds XD)

[stripedpetunia.livejournal.com]

That's why I said 'if you reattack' and 'try'. XD To be brutally honest, I've tried to read your old writing and I don't like it, and also, ewww Mary-Sue. Hell, next ofic you write, I will read it. As long as it's in a language I understand. ^^

[stripedpetunia.livejournal.com]

Okay, I actually said attempt, didn't I? MEH.

[askerian]

ahaha, no surprise here. I don't like it either, thank god I got better. And i'm afraid she's always going to be a Sue, because this is the kind of audience it's aimed toward. XD At least I hope to make her a likeable Sue... At the moment she's annoying the hell out of me. ~__~

I would write more ofic if, you know... I had ideas. *flops* But the only universe developed enough to use it is... um. I need a plot, dude. At least a starting point. I can't use the main character's POV, at least not from the start; he's about as beast as he's human. Way too weird thought patterns. ;.;

[stripedpetunia.livejournal.com]

I completely understand the universe-sans-plot problem. Unfortunately. ;_;

[askerian]

um, this is the first story I ever wrote. I mean. ever. So it's not as bad as most beginners, I at least knew how to spell, but it still kinda sucks. =_=;;;

[nishasha.livejournal.com]

I attempted to read Cercle with the help of Google translator 'cause I was desperate... and realized, no Nisha, never ever use an online translator to translate fics again. Translators make things silly. I'll try to read it in original French though, just 'cause I like all of your stuff so much.

Does he have to have an angel/demon name, or could you just make one up?

[askerian]

hehehe.

Nah, not actual names, just names that sounds as if. :p I made up quite a few, so it's okay.

[nishasha.livejournal.com]

Good, good then. It must have been icky to have a character all drawn up and not know what to call him. =_=; I remember back about two years ago, when I thought I was an uber talented author (and I now know that no, I am not), that I went around in the Naruto universe creating OC's who had names like "Brett." ... Yes, in Naruto-land, there are millions of people with English names, of course. Millions. You just don't see them b/c they're discriminated against, of course. *coughs* I was lame.

[askerian]

Nah, he was called Uriel. I just decided to get rid of the flimsy connection between him and the Archangel, in which case he doesn't have much of a reason to be called Uriel anymore.

hee, yeah, that kind of coherence is hard to get at first. too many details to juggle for an inexperienced author. there's always somewhere it shows. For me it was the lack of variety in my OCs backgrounds. Most of the girls have lost their parents and are living with family who hate them. =____=;;; classical sue.

[nishasha.livejournal.com]

It's so hard to NOT write a Sue. It's just so easy. Damned Sues, infiltrating people's minds.

oh, btw, I adore your fics. *loves* All your Naruto fics are amazing. *throws pocky at you* =)

random comment!

[kurai008.livejournal.com]

J'ai ri en voyant que tu pensais à quelque chose comme Kouriel pour le nom d'Uriel; au Québec, on a le mot 'courriel' pour désigner les e-mails (et on a pourriel (poubelle+courriel) pour les junk mails).. Ça t'avance vraiment à rien de savoir ça mais pour moi c'est vraiment rigolo comme situation XD

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

Angel names are supposed to end in -el, aren't they? Not necessarily -iel.

[askerian]

names ending in -el, -iel

isn't that what I said? =_=

Re: random comment!

[askerian]

hahahaha mdr. okay pas kouriel. dommage, c'est joli.

[trypton88.livejournal.com]

[animeprincess.livejournal.com]

*snerk* and if you think about it, Kiel sounds vaguely like "kill". X3

watch your arrow-tipped tailed asses, demons! X3

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

Ah, well, I wasn't disagreeing. You just seemed to sort of be implying that it had to be an -iel name, and I wasn't sure that seemed right.

[luriko-ysabeth.livejournal.com]

In one of Kurtz's Deryni novels, she used "Auriel" as a varient of "Uriel." I don't know whether that would be of use to you.

Also, one of the sets of mecha in Sakura Taisen are called "Japhkiel," but I don't know whether that name would fit him or not.

[askerian]

Auriel would work just fine, but it makes me think of Auel, a Gundam Seed Destiny character. He even has the same kind of hair. XD The other one's a bit too harsh for him. ^^;

[luriko-ysabeth.livejournal.com]

Oh. Haven't seen Seed or variations.

Hm. Do you have a Kiriel or a Zadkiel or Sarael in your story yet? Or a Mahalael or Israfel?

Je le savais !

[ladyblackb.livejournal.com]

Rien qu'à le voir, je me doutais que c'était le frère d'Ashram. ^^ C'est vrai qu'ils n'ont pas vraiment le même caractère.

Bon maintenant que j'ai posté, il faut que je suggère un nom, c'est ça ? J'aime bien les noms en -el moi... Mais si tu veux un k, on peut faire un mix: Korel ?

[sabriel-sylfaen.livejournal.com]

I'm gonna agree with Merrygirl on this one. Kiel sounds like a good name.

name for Uriel

[karanseraph]

What about Leon? It's kinda random, but I know someone whose name is Uri and his 'american' name is Leon, so it made me think of it.

Re: name for Uriel

[askerian]

*coughcough* No offense, but over here Leon is a name for a grandpa, it isn't really angelic.

Re: Je le savais !

[askerian]

Franchement, des personnes qui se ressemblent aussi peu, ca peut pas être un hasard. XD

Korel ca me fait penser à corel dans ff7 ^^;;

[askerian]

Ooh, Kiriel, maybe. Zadkiel is too harsh and i've got a Sarah and an Israfel. Thanks for the suggestions^^

[(Anonymous)]

Hmmmm...It's not an actuall angel name, I don't think, but I recall the name Zauriel from something or other...I think it sounds very angelic, and you can never have too many Z's