#x____x# heh. boy do i have improved. There was no way to go but up.

It's probably gonna be a net thing, because it's a coming of age story, which means it's aimed at teenagers, which means "a love story between two male characters? We can't have that. Make Askerian a woman, it won't change much." Besides the story starts all about Alizea and Ashram, but slowly the focus shifts, and so in the end it's as much about Askerian and Reiyel, if not more. If I want to sell it, the main characters have to be the same all along, I think. =__=;;;