random teamwork stuff

[askerian]

no ficcage, just ideas. An email i got made me think of stuff i'll have to adress, and i'm trying to list it to have a clearer idea of where to go. because i'm realizing that my first idea to lead to that rawwrsex scene just isn't working, which is why it's taking so long to finish the naruto chapter.



1) Sakura's First Lover (well, that's a big word XD I was just reminded that sakura wasnt a virgin and i'm writing a short-ish fic about it) randomly meeting her, and her Boys being all jealous -- poor kid. he's such a nice, normal boy. Muahahahaha. I can so see sasuke and naruto competing to see who can make the city boy freak first.

2) need to make sure i'm not turning sakura into a Sue.

3) need to adress Lee's feelings at some point

4) naru chapter: need to plot the Iruka/Naruto meeting where he explains what the hell was going on -- I just realized that maybe i can make the rawrrsex scene come more naturally by having something Iruka says lead NaruKyuu to ponder the idea...

5) sasu chapter: maybe introduce some ... not enemies, but not-friendlies. Or get teh Council idiots to come back. Hmm. Must build the world/politics/villagers more. Maybe if i get a good idea, it can be in the sasuke chapter, since the rawwr stuff needs to be in a naruto chapter. Maybe -- OHHH maybe i can move the burning fan scene sooner. And Sasuke can be all shakey and he can actually be not all rational when he considers naruto's idea, and then he'll say yes easier -- ooooh i do think it could work.

*rubs hands gleefuly* Joo? anyone else who knows what i'm on about? whatcha think? ideas, suggestions?


Also, if anyone gets ideas about issues i should adress, please tell me. *^___^*

don't fucking lean over me from behind and whisper in my ear, biatch. of COURSE the sysadmin can see that you went to a pr0n site -- hell, he could even READ YOUR FUCKING MAIL, if he gave a flying fuck. I'll elbow you in the nose next time you try to read over my shoulder.

Comments

[joosetta.livejournal.com]

<3333!!!

I can't wait to read the bit about Sakuras first :3. *loves* I can just see Naruto. . strutting and stuff XD

[askerian]

XD he'd be so cute, too, pretending to be nice and pretending not to notice that his friendly taps could break his bones, and grinning widely... WITH FANGS. And Sasuke would be all cold and brooding and all ninja-of-the-night, i-can-chop-you-into-a-hundred-bits-faster-than-you-can-say-hello, blooshed-makes-me-laugh-crazily, my-eyeshadow-is-scary-not-only-gay.

Nacchi

[(Anonymous)]

"2) need to make sure i'm not turning sakura into a Sue."
Je crois que y'a pas de souci à se faire ^__^
...et je crois que c'est tout ce que je peux te dire -__-" Moi pas avoir eu de spoilers u__u

"Also, if anyone gets ideas about issues i should adress, please tell me"
C'est triste, mais le seul mot qui me vient à l'esprit c'est "lemon" T___T (pas très constructif tout ça. Sorry.)

Re: Nacchi

[askerian]

XD oui, lemons. y en aura, t'en fais pas.

*câline*

Re: Nacchi

[(Anonymous)]

*ronronne* vouiii ! *satisfaite dans sa perversité*
Ah et je trouve l'idée du premier copain très trèèèès interessante.

Re: Nacchi

[askerian]

bah, c'est une histoire mignonne de première fois. pauvre sakura, en "vacances" dans une famille de non-ninjas. Ca me permet de développer sa famille aussi, c'est marrant. c'est tellement... NORMAL. sasuke et naruto ont vraiment aucun point de référence dans ce coté ci de sa vie à elle.

Re: Nacchi

[(Anonymous)]

Les pauvres petits...ça va leur faire un sacré choc, alors...*rit d'avance* Et mettre du normal dans un monde comme le leur, c'est ça qui est original en fait ^__^

Re: Nacchi

[celinafairy.livejournal.com]

OMG: This icon is sooooooooo sweet. (sorry to be off topic here, but I was just browsing and... *squeeee*) What a lovely, lovely, adorable icon. *snicker*

Re: Nacchi

[askerian]

XDD heh, thank you. you're free to steal if at some point you feel like getting another icon.

*is an icon whore* *does not understand how one can SURVIVE with only three of them* *rolls in her 50 icons*

Re: Nacchi

[celinafairy.livejournal.com]

*laughs* I'd love to have more, too, believe me :D And this one is... evil. Really evil. But cool. Hehe.

[miko-no-da.livejournal.com]

I still want to see you make good on that comment about Naruto spending time with the Inuzuka to learn to control his instincts better. *grins* Poor, poor Inuzuka... they'll all be going nuts with him around. *snickers*

[askerian]

yes, yes... at some point... :P

[lomelinde-sama.livejournal.com]

*dons cheerleader outfit*

Piske j'y connais rien, moi je dis, en avant ! Pour le reste ... Je suis assez d'accord avec la remarque "lemon", mais je prends tout !!!

[kiyakotari.livejournal.com]

**chuckles** I think I like what I see here...and Sasuke and Naruto getting all possessive about Sakura's previous lover being around...I SO want to read that.

The Bastard Operator From Hell (http://bofh.ntk.net/Bastard.html)

**points at the link** The truth behind Sysadmins...

Oh, and the reason all those pics werent showing up? My website host just deleted ALL of their acocunts...without warning....so I'm in the process of rebuilding elsewhere.

[askerian]

'm still trying to imagine a good, funny scene.

XD!! evil, evil sysadmin.

ALL their accounts? WTF. O_O;;;

[greycolourgirl.livejournal.com]

My father is a sysadmin at the university in the area I live at T__T I HAVE had him check my own bloody e-mail, and then confront me about some stuff....bad memories.
But he's cool with it now :p Thank god.
I know how annoying it is to have someone reading over your shoulder though(has threatened her own sister for doing this many times)

Having all the guys absolutly OMGSOINLOVE with Sakura would turn her into a sue. Insofar, she isn't one ^_^ She has faults too and you stated quite clearly, I think, that she can't defeat certain people...yeah, don't worry about the sue thing.

I <3 the rest of your ideas ^^ my favorite would be the Sasu being shakey, OoooOooo.

[askerian]

sysadmin is my nice teacher i mentioned, and he already promised that he wouldn't read my lj, so i believe him -- or at least believe that even if he does, he'll pretend he didn't. XD

well, sasuke loves naruto more than he does her, and i guess if she was a real sure he'd love her more because OMG SASUSAKU SO ROMANTIC, but eventually this won't be as true, and it also won't be as true that she's not that strong and not that dangerous and not that cool, so i'm still worried. U_U;;

as for shakey!sasuke, the scene has been written for ages and i love my own evilness, muahahahaha. now i just need to lead to it.

[windshades.livejournal.com]

They all sound good to me. ^_^ I look forward to reading them. I definately think that the "Council idiots" need to make a reappearance as they were NOT pleased with the situation. How does that get resolved? Also, we've seen that Sakura's parents come around eventually, but how does that happen?

[askerian]

yah, i'm thinking up council problems stuff. maybe when sasuke goes and reclaim all the money and stuff that was held until he started his clan again. and he needs to get installed into a clan head position now!! XD omg though that's probably not before the kid's actually born. hehe. (but still, that means he gets a vote at the council, and while he's a clan of exactly two people at the time, there's still the weight of the memories and what the uchiha /meant/, and maybe he can play on that and ... i'm getting all excited over POLITICS. yeurgh.)

sakura's dad starts getting better next chapter. if i manage to finish naruto's first. Her mom.. i dunno.

[windshades.livejournal.com]

Oooh! *squees* Exciting! Again, sounds good to me. ^_^

[sangoire.livejournal.com]

Hey, I'm Debbie. I've been a fan of Teamwork for a while and only just discovered that you had an LJ. Do you mind if I friend you? ^_^

[askerian]

oooh! no, i don't mind. *does yay!friended dance*