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(naruto) possession
prologue and part 1 here
http://www.livejournal.com/users/reiyel/
Warnings: dark, ANGST, violence, torture, insanity, gore...
this is the fic with the naruto torture. there's itachi and sasuke too, and GORE. i'm posting the first part (all of the naruto POV bit) of chapter 2 because i'm almost done with the rest (which is sasuke POV). hopefully, tomorrow... 9_9;;; right.
Anyway, now is bed time.
"NO!!! I'LL NEVER LISTEN TO YOU AGAIN!!"
Naruto's head hurt. It was ringing with echoes of furious yells and snarls and howls, with the sharp crackle of electricity, resonating with the hum of intense chakra.
"I HATE YOU!!"
He turned on his side, slowly. The skin over his abdomen felt weird, too tight, too sensitive. He curled up to protect it. Why wouldn't his ears flatten back to dampen the furious yelling?
"--going to KILL YOU!!" Metallic clangs, clashing blades.
Stupid Sasuke. So melodramatic. Couldn't he keep it down? Naruto was busy trying to make sure his head didn't fall apart.
A startled gasp, the sound of a body hitting the wall. "LET ME GO!!!"
The floor was sticky. His skin was sticky, too. Why was the bastard traitor there? Naruto should get up and tear his throat out; that would keep him quiet.
"Listen, brat--" Low, dangerous, tired-and-annoyed voice.
Furious snarling in reply. "Don't you call me brat, you fucking--"
Sharp, clear warning tone. "Respect your elders!"
"You lost all right to that seven years ago, big brother!"
Silence.
Naruto refused to try interpreting it all. He didn't care. He only cared about the pulsating migraine and the uncomfortable feeling in his guts, about the incredible tiredness and the even more incredible need to rip someone to shreds to sate his hunger. Mm, maybe ramen would do. He'd have to make the bastard traitor get him some -- Sasuke owed him at least that.
"I said, LET GO!!" A crackle of electricity again, the buzzing and chirping of the Chidori.
... and after Sasuke gave him his bowl, Naruto would disembowel him. And devour his flesh, and gnaw on his bones -- like that he'd never leave again. Oh yes -- he'd always be with Naruto. Part of him, always and forever -- the fucking traitor.
Suddenly, he could hear the constant growls in the background a lot better. It was probably, he decided after a moment of thought, because he was the one growling.
"Fuck." The rough, crude word sounded out of place used with that low, dark-velvet voice. There were steps approaching him, resonating weirdly on the stone -- a few squelching noises, the smell of drying blood -- and then someone knelt at his side, an elegant hand landed on his shoulder. He struck blindly, half scared and half outraged. He recognized that scent, and hated and feared it with all of himself.
"Shhh, boy ... It's okay, calm down, you're safe..."
These words, he heard. But he didn't understand. Safe? The man hovering over him was like all things not safe in Naruto's life. He had just ... hurt him, hurt him so bad Naruto couldn't find enough words to describe it, and now he claimed he was safe? That... didn't compute. The blond tried to straighten up, tried to really look at him.
Weary. Very weary. His lower eyelid twitching uncontrollably. ... black eyes. Drying blood on his cheek. Mouth twisted in a grim, bitter expression -- just barely. Just enough to keep Naruto still as he tried to puzzle it out.
"I'll explain everything later, I promise. You just need to stay calm."
He looked around the room, frowning faintly -- worriedly -- and seeing anything but cold contempt and annoyance on this usually utterly inexpressive face was making Naruto doubt ... something. Maybe his own sanity.
"We can't stay here."
Naruto agreed with everything in that sentence but the "we".
http://www.livejournal.com/users/reiyel/
Warnings: dark, ANGST, violence, torture, insanity, gore...
this is the fic with the naruto torture. there's itachi and sasuke too, and GORE. i'm posting the first part (all of the naruto POV bit) of chapter 2 because i'm almost done with the rest (which is sasuke POV). hopefully, tomorrow... 9_9;;; right.
Anyway, now is bed time.
"NO!!! I'LL NEVER LISTEN TO YOU AGAIN!!"
Naruto's head hurt. It was ringing with echoes of furious yells and snarls and howls, with the sharp crackle of electricity, resonating with the hum of intense chakra.
"I HATE YOU!!"
He turned on his side, slowly. The skin over his abdomen felt weird, too tight, too sensitive. He curled up to protect it. Why wouldn't his ears flatten back to dampen the furious yelling?
"--going to KILL YOU!!" Metallic clangs, clashing blades.
Stupid Sasuke. So melodramatic. Couldn't he keep it down? Naruto was busy trying to make sure his head didn't fall apart.
A startled gasp, the sound of a body hitting the wall. "LET ME GO!!!"
The floor was sticky. His skin was sticky, too. Why was the bastard traitor there? Naruto should get up and tear his throat out; that would keep him quiet.
"Listen, brat--" Low, dangerous, tired-and-annoyed voice.
Furious snarling in reply. "Don't you call me brat, you fucking--"
Sharp, clear warning tone. "Respect your elders!"
"You lost all right to that seven years ago, big brother!"
Silence.
Naruto refused to try interpreting it all. He didn't care. He only cared about the pulsating migraine and the uncomfortable feeling in his guts, about the incredible tiredness and the even more incredible need to rip someone to shreds to sate his hunger. Mm, maybe ramen would do. He'd have to make the bastard traitor get him some -- Sasuke owed him at least that.
"I said, LET GO!!" A crackle of electricity again, the buzzing and chirping of the Chidori.
... and after Sasuke gave him his bowl, Naruto would disembowel him. And devour his flesh, and gnaw on his bones -- like that he'd never leave again. Oh yes -- he'd always be with Naruto. Part of him, always and forever -- the fucking traitor.
Suddenly, he could hear the constant growls in the background a lot better. It was probably, he decided after a moment of thought, because he was the one growling.
"Fuck." The rough, crude word sounded out of place used with that low, dark-velvet voice. There were steps approaching him, resonating weirdly on the stone -- a few squelching noises, the smell of drying blood -- and then someone knelt at his side, an elegant hand landed on his shoulder. He struck blindly, half scared and half outraged. He recognized that scent, and hated and feared it with all of himself.
"Shhh, boy ... It's okay, calm down, you're safe..."
These words, he heard. But he didn't understand. Safe? The man hovering over him was like all things not safe in Naruto's life. He had just ... hurt him, hurt him so bad Naruto couldn't find enough words to describe it, and now he claimed he was safe? That... didn't compute. The blond tried to straighten up, tried to really look at him.
Weary. Very weary. His lower eyelid twitching uncontrollably. ... black eyes. Drying blood on his cheek. Mouth twisted in a grim, bitter expression -- just barely. Just enough to keep Naruto still as he tried to puzzle it out.
"I'll explain everything later, I promise. You just need to stay calm."
He looked around the room, frowning faintly -- worriedly -- and seeing anything but cold contempt and annoyance on this usually utterly inexpressive face was making Naruto doubt ... something. Maybe his own sanity.
"We can't stay here."
Naruto agreed with everything in that sentence but the "we".
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(PS: I'm just a random fan who added you to my friend's list. I hope you don't mind. ^^;)
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glad you like it #^^# it was kind of annoying to give the effect i want and wasn't quite sure i totally reached it. thanks ^____^
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Mmmm, the hatelove.
Naruto could really use some ramen.
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DOOM. I love this word for some reason XDDDD
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i kinda like it too. *resists urge to preen*
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I really love the language and emotion and sheer quesiness of it all hehe...I hope you write more soon ^^
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*laughs because she made Asuka give her bits of the next chapter while writing it*
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*obediently writes more*
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You just have to stop and consider, for a moment, exactly WHAT Itachi was trying to do...and what it was that must have happened instead.
Can we say, "Oops, I fucked up?"
More pretty boys for Suka....cause I love this fic already.
Pretty Pretty (http://www.angeltowns4.com/members/kiyakotari/photoshoot/UDSC200524.jpg)
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...but I'm really disturbed that I'm hungry now #_#
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Nacchi
(Anonymous) 2005-05-06 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)C'est magnifique *__*
C'est tellement bien décrit qu'on peut facilement se mettre à la place de Naruto et même comprendre son envie de chair (enfin, celle de Kyubi)... aaah, give us some more !! X3
Re: Nacchi
prends-toi un lj!! ils sont gratuits maintenant, et même si tu postes pas, comme ça tu recois un mail quand on te répond. ;p
Re: Nacchi
(Anonymous) 2005-05-07 11:06 am (UTC)(link)alors ce sera pour plus tard ^^"
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*waits impatiently for more* I was just wondering last night what had happened to this story. ^_^
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Poor Naruto, all cut up and hurt...easy to understand why he cracks.
*petloves*
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More. o___o
**wipes drool off keyboard** ''... And devour his flesh, and gnaw on his bones''
I need a pic of that XDDDD