askerian: Serious Karkat in a red long-sleeved shirt (Sasuke_pretty when you die)
askerian ([personal profile] askerian) wrote2005-04-29 12:59 am

... hnnn... (more saki-chan)

... sera made me.




The dress is just perfect. Dark blue satin with white accents. Short, short skirt, fluffy petticoat, ruffles and lace, a tight bodice and a low neckline. There are gloves too, and a cute little hat... cap... thing. It's an adorable dress, made to accentuate the slimness and preciousness of already slender, short people. It's really, really cute.

Yes, just perfect.

Sasuke is going to blow a gasket.

Naruto makes himself comfortable in his little seat on the branch and waits for the bastard to come home and see the present he's left on his bed.

Sasuke has been a right dick for two weeks now, and it's starting to get on his nerves. Naruto can understand being embarrassed -- heck, he doesn't feel so self-assured when remembering that ... thing in the backstreet, it's a bit too big to just laugh off or pretend it never happened.

And yet that's what Sasuke is doing. Pretending Naruto never held him tight and caressed him, pretending that he /hates/ Naruto... or maybe he's not pretending at all, and this hurts, because Naruto stupidly wasn't expecting him to clam up so hard and so fast. He keeps sniping and sneering, when he's not outright insulting him. Naruto hates it. He wanted to apologize at first, for being a bit grabby -- even though he doesn't really regret it because just remembering Saki-chan's scent is enough to make him hard and he could smell that she was as aroused as he was; he /knows/ it wasn't as unwelcome as Sasuke pretends it was.

Maybe Sasuke is in denial, and maybe he regrets, and if he does, Naruto will be very sad indeed, and even apologize, if Sasuke even lets him broach the subject -- but that doesn't mean he's going to let the bastard walk all over him. Besides, after Sasuke attacked him like he meant to crush his ribcage in the name of sparring, and then walked away as if he didn't even exist, Naruto isn't very inclined to being understanding. It's a good thing he heals fast.

He's getting tired of Sasuke's attempts to prove how manly he is, though. Naruto knows that Sasuke is a man, but there's really no call to prove it by beating him up at every occasion.

Besides, the dress was very cheap, and it's not as if Naruto spends his money on a lot of things besides rent and ramen. He isn't about to let such an occasion pass.




here, sera. now i sleep. sleeeeeeep. =__=;;;;

[identity profile] windandwater.livejournal.com 2005-04-28 11:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Bwehehehehe :3 I wub j00, Asuka! This universes isjust so... compelling and interesting, in that smutty crossdressing sort of way.

[identity profile] kayoko.livejournal.com 2005-04-29 12:01 am (UTC)(link)
i love you! T____T

I am totally in love with this universe and *dances around like a mad woman*

*fangirls for more*

[identity profile] gakifang.livejournal.com 2005-04-29 02:20 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is so much more interesting than studying. Now I must sally forth and dig through my memories to reread the other bits of this. Because this just rocks so hard.

[identity profile] rianax.livejournal.com 2005-04-29 03:27 am (UTC)(link)
Someone needs to draw this. please.

[identity profile] animeprincess.livejournal.com 2005-04-29 07:35 am (UTC)(link)
ooo, Saki-chan. ^o^ i can picture Naruto waiting like he is, a sorta far-off look in his eyes and a slight blush to his cheeks. hawt.

[identity profile] naturalcyber.livejournal.com 2005-04-30 02:21 am (UTC)(link)
Yum. I adore Sasuke/Saki-chan. I adore them so much I'm trying to draw Saki-chan and that lovely outfit from the first section. . . except CGing on a laptop is very hard without a tablet.

Oh well. . . I'll get it done before the end of the summer and I'll send you a link to it. I may even turn it into a series of artworks if the wonderful inspiration continues....

[identity profile] windandwater.livejournal.com 2005-04-30 03:11 am (UTC)(link)
O___O

For fanarts, I will personally beat Asuka to death for more ficness. Especially since I'm the one goading her on. XD!
ext_9839: Yuko (Default)

you don't know me...

[identity profile] lukita.livejournal.com 2005-04-30 09:07 am (UTC)(link)
Just doing some drive-by reading, I'll have you know it's completely your fault I have 'Saki-chan' on the brain now and would probably churn out art for it.

[identity profile] sanjuno.livejournal.com 2005-05-01 04:47 pm (UTC)(link)
I agree with all of the above. Saki-chan ficness is a wonderful thing, so is fanart. I will have to draw something of my own, just because it is so, so good.

One thing I would like to add from my own twisted mind is this question:

Will Sasuke turn the tables on Naruto? As in, when do we get to see Naruto in a little frilly dress and stockings? I'm sorry! But for some reason every time I think of Saki-chan I start imagining Nana-chan...

... please don't hurt me...

[identity profile] windshades.livejournal.com 2005-05-01 09:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Absolutely amazing. I especially like Naruto's defense/reaction to what happened between Saki-chan and him. This is such a beautifully crafted fanfic universe. Bravo!
One thing: /Maybe Sasuke is in denial, and maybe he regrets,/ "regrets it" or "feels regret" would sound better.