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askerian ([personal profile] askerian) wrote2005-03-22 10:34 pm

more teamwork. O_o

Sorry to everyone i still owe a reply to. *group-molests* I'll do that tomorrow, promise. I love you all. X3333

This scene isn't finished -- that's half of it, maybe -- but i have a need-to-sleep-NOW headache and won't be writing more until tomorrow night anyway. So here's some more Sakura, and then i'll go with Sasuke and Naruto.



Her steps had directed her exactly where she always went when things got bad, but she didn't notice until her hand landed on the door of the Yamanaka flower shop. Ino wasn't in sight at first, and realizing that she may very well be on mission, Sakura suddenly felt like crying right in the middle of the street.

"Hello, how may I help you -- ah, it's you, forehead-girl." Emerging from the back, Ino was wearing a dirty apron and wiping her hands on a rag, a bunch of flowers that Sakura didn't feel like identifying under her arm.

"Ino..." With faint horror, she heard herself choke; two seconds later the bunch had been abandoned on the counter, the little plaque indicating the shop's opening hours had been turned and she was being pulled to the backyard and the greenhouse.

"Okay, spill." Ino pushed her until she sat on a bench in the corner, crossed her arms on her chest and waited. Sakura breathed in the smell of the flowers spilling over the sitting spot, trying to calm down.

"I fought with mom." She lowered her head; both her hands were fisted in her lap.

Ino argued with her father about a day out of two; huge rows that contained screaming and throwing things and sometimes ninja skills, and brought all the neighbors to the windows to watch the neverending Yamanaka drama. But it was very different; Sakura almost never did more with her parents than exchange a few annoyed comments -- which were usually enough to worry her to death, seeing as her parents were not the arguing sort at all.

"Wow. Must have been a bad one. What was it about?"

"I -- I... Ino... I don't know w-what I can say..."

Belatedly, she was remembering that there was a fairly good chance Ino would not be happy to learn that Sakura had snagged Sasuke for herself, and she wasn't sure how the blonde would react to learning that the shyer, more traditional Sakura had managed to get herself in a threesome. And there was the Kyuubi problem... what was she going to think of her now?

"What's your level of clearance?" she whispered. It was probably higher than hers; Ino was a chuunin. But she wasn't sure it was enough.

"Whoa there. If it's village business, then you might be better off not telling me."

"It's -- okay, not telling details. But -- Okay." She took a deep breath, then another -- then yet another. Ino was looking worried. "It's -- something happened the other evening with Sasuke-kun and Naruto and I'm pregnant."

Okay, maybe that was a lot to blurt out in one go. Ino seemed to need a while to digest that one.

"Uh. Okay. Just so we're clear, Sasuke-kun and Naruto are related to the reason why you're pregnant?"

Sakura couldn't help but laugh, even if it sounded more like a sob. "Rather, yes."

"So. That sort of related. Yeah, I. Wow. Crap. Wait-- not that I think it's inherently bad that they were but -- wait wait wait, which one of them?"

Sakura whimpered and curled up, hiding in her hands. Her face was burning.

Ino didn't move for a few seconds, her breath just a bit too fast, and then she reached out and tentatively touched her shoulder.

"... I. Don't know," Sakura admitted, so softly she wasn't sure she'd actually said anything.

Ino squeezed her shoulder softly. "Okay, okay. I'm guessing there was a good reason -- I mean, I know you, Sakura." Her tone turned falsely snide and she nudged her gently. "Your forehead is way too huge and your breasts way too small to reel in two men at once. You vile temptress, you."

Sakura couldn't help it, she laughed. Sobbed a little, but mostly laughed.

"Hey, wait a sec. You had sex with Sasuke-kun!! You bitch."

Sakura flinched.

"Was he any good?"

"Ino!"

"Yeah, well, most pretty boys think their looks will be enough for everything, but it doesn't compensate for bad skills--"

Sakura whimpered and put her hands on her ears firmly. Ino smirked at her, tugging on her wrists until she let go.

"More seriously... I'm... a little jealous. Wait, scratch that, a lot jealous. But... sure, I still like him, but... you love him, don't you?"

Sakura nodded, looking down at her knees.

"Then I'm happy for you. And we're going to spar tomorrow, and this time I will kick your ass."

"Heh. You can try, Ino-pig."

[identity profile] miko-no-da.livejournal.com 2005-03-22 09:47 pm (UTC)(link)
*rolls eyes* I should have known you'd be able to make me like Ino, too. Damn you. *grins*

*bounces and waits patiently for the next part* Take care of yourself. Headaches suck. -_-
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[personal profile] edenfalling 2005-03-22 11:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Random question: what shows are your icon images from?

[identity profile] pastles.livejournal.com 2005-03-23 01:35 am (UTC)(link)
I see Naruto, Fushigi Yuugi (I think), I don't know, Hikaru no Go and Prince of Tennis. :D

[identity profile] miko-no-da.livejournal.com 2005-03-23 03:11 am (UTC)(link)
Sasuke and Naruto from Naruto
Chiriko from Fushigi Yuugi
Koganei Kaoru from Flame of Recca
Touya and Hikaru from Hikaru no Go
and Momo and Kaidou from Prince of Tennis.

I'm going to be adding some Whistle! to the mix as soon as I find a good picture. Probably Kazamatsuri. ^_^

[identity profile] pastles.livejournal.com 2005-03-23 04:11 am (UTC)(link)
OH! KOGANEI! No wonder he looked familiar! I used to watch the anime, but it's been a while

I love this icon of yours. So true. So true XD

[identity profile] rianax.livejournal.com 2005-03-22 10:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank Lord for Ino's blunt, overbearing maternal instinct, she is exactly what Sakura needs, a shoulder to cry on and someone to laugh with.

[identity profile] rianax.livejournal.com 2005-03-24 07:31 pm (UTC)(link)
/I guess she's feeling a bit down right now, but i'm not sure if she knows it's as much because sasuke is taken as it's because her sakura-chan has two significant others now. X3/

Ino has never been in love with Sasuke, like yes, lust most definitely, but never as wholeheartly as Sakura. The envy would come into play with Sakura having two devoted suitors, problems aside, while she has none, but that part would be small and surpassed that her best friend is in the mother of all stituations. Concern, worry, bewilderment, affectionate protectiveness would dominate 'cause why Sasuke and Naruto are devoted and pretty, Sakura-chan is going to be a world of stress in the next few monthes.

[identity profile] ketsuke.livejournal.com 2005-03-22 10:56 pm (UTC)(link)
*melts to pile of happy*

Perfect timing. I get all worked up over a Humane Society case, come home to this.. and.. *happy sigh* The interaction between Ino and Sakura? *lots and lots of love, spiced with a bit of envy, directed your way*

[identity profile] ivyadrena.livejournal.com 2005-03-22 11:00 pm (UTC)(link)
o_O I luff you so very very much. ^____^ You write Sakura's mother quite convincingly, and there's always room for more chummy Sakura-Ino friendshipping. I seem to keep running into snarkyness in fics with those two, lately... *grumbles*
Keep up teh wonderful writing!

[identity profile] animeprincess.livejournal.com 2005-03-22 11:10 pm (UTC)(link)
myaaaahh! <3333 more of the lovely ficcieness from Asuka!

this is beautiful, my lovely, j'taime. ((^^;;; hope i spelled it right...that's pretty well the extent on my french and it's not even very good...*sigh.*))

in any event, this is the fic that just might convince me to dye my hair pink. maybe. >_>

*LOVES ON! <3333333*

[identity profile] mojojessjo.livejournal.com 2005-03-22 11:22 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm really liking how these Sakura chapters are shaping up. It isn't very often that we get to see a GOOD Sakura POV where she isn't acting the drooling buffoon over Sasuke. I'm very glad that you're writing more Teamwork!

[identity profile] sailor-comet.livejournal.com 2005-03-23 12:30 am (UTC)(link)
I love the bit about Ino and her dad fighting; can totally see it.

Great interaction between the two. This is a happy, comfy part of the fic.

~Sam

[identity profile] sarolynne.livejournal.com 2005-03-23 03:10 am (UTC)(link)
I didn't see this earlier! I'm very happy to see Ino's there for Sakura--I mean, she needs it, and even though Ino's shocked, she's still there. What more can a person ask of their friends? ;)

[identity profile] tonoxtekko.livejournal.com 2005-03-23 05:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww! *Gives Ino points* Bravo! That went well ^.^ It's good to know that there's more people in their corner *nods and molests for being good and posting more*

[identity profile] stephensstuff.livejournal.com 2005-03-24 05:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow... Go, Random Journal button. I seem to have stumbled on some decent writing.

Heh. "Decent," I say. I'm already a fan, and I've been reading this for what, threee minutes?

I'm assuming you'd not be terribly offended if I friended you.

[identity profile] stephensstuff.livejournal.com 2005-03-25 05:14 am (UTC)(link)
... For future reference, I believe and hold to this statement:

Bi = Better.

<3