ext_52005 ([identity profile] sarolynne.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] askerian 2004-12-18 02:43 pm (UTC)

more naked then when he was just dry

A little typo. "Then" should be "than."

Other than that, it's very fun. Where's the rest? ;)

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