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askerian ([personal profile] askerian) wrote2004-10-05 03:47 pm

More naruto. *dies*

x_x second part of the third chapter-- which will, of course, be even longer than the second, which was already longer than the first. And I wanted to finish that in three chapters, damnit.



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They were almost at the wall when he felt about fifty of the clones disappear in quick succession. Naruto glanced at Sasuke in askance, the weight of their pink-haired teammate on his back just enough of a bother that he didn't want to lose a second stopping to look behind him.

"Jounin," Sasuke replied curtly, saving his breath as much as possible. "A few ANBU. Went Kage Bunshin on our clones."

They leaped over an old man walking his dog and kept going toward the wall, channeling chakra in their legs to prepare for the jump.

"Down!!!"

Sasuke shouldered him out of the way, sending him and Sakura-chan roll through a hedge and on a lawn. He had to let go of the girl not to crush her under his weight, and when he stopped --or more like when a wall stopped his head -- he didn't know where she was. There were kunai stabbing the grass all around him, and he dodged a second flurry of weapons, looking around him wildly.

"Sakura-chan!!"

There was no blood on the lawn, he noticed as he absently punched the ANBU who'd been targeting him through a wall. She couldn't have been hurt-- erk!!
He froze, a hand closed around his neck from behind.

"You should keep better track of your teammates," Kakashi commented lazily.

He could smell Sakura, hear her breathe. From the corner of his eye, he saw pink hair, level with Kakashi's shoulder. Their teacher was holding her, had probably snatched her from the lawn a mere instant before the weapons hit the ground.

She was safe -- but were they, really? Was he friend or foe right now? He hadn't tried to stop Naruto earlier, when he had snarled at him after getting rid of Anko and the guards, but now it was different-- maybe they'd wasted the one chance Kakashi could offer them without being declared a traitor to the village...

There was a clash of steel against steel from the street and Naruto tensed. Sasuke!! He was still fighting!! But the hold on his neck...

"Kakashi-sensei!" he protested, just once, because he didn't want to attack his teacher but he needed to go, NOW, and-- "OW!!"

He needed to remind himself that Sasuke was still fighting not to whirl around and try to beat Kakashi up; not that he would have presented much of a danger for the man, what with still being out of balance from the swift kick to the ass he'd just received.

"Bastard!" he growled even as he kept following the momentum he'd been given, bursting through the hedge and on the street. Kakashi had ways of helping you out that made you wish you'd failed miserably alone instead. At least Sakura was safe for now.

Sasuke was kneeling on the ground, facing an ANBU with a tiger mask. He was holding his stomach and looked pissed as hell. Naruto didn't need more to knee the tiger guy in the head as hard as he could, knocking him out, grab Sasuke's shoulder and jump back in the garden. He-Kyuubi wanted to kill the guy for hurting Sasuke, but that was a bad idea, because they didn't need to be accused of murder on top of the rest and Sasuke would be furious that Naruto thought he needed to finish off his adversaries.

Kakashi was standing, Sakura under an arm like a package, watching them in that bored way of his. She was blushing, holding her torn dress in place.

"... Sensei..."

Sasuke's eyes were red and whirling like windmills, and if he did recognize Kakashi, he didn't seem to care. A kunai flew from his hand, aiming for their teacher's chest. Naruto gasped.

"Are you crazy?!" He protested even as Kakashi disappeared, letting the weapon thunk into the wall behind him. Suddenly without support, Sakura stumbled and only her training let her manage to roll and land in a proper crouch.

"Get her and run," Sasuke replied grimly, still targeting their teacher.

He kept narrowly missing, and Naruto wondered faintly why Kakashi was letting himself be driven farther and farther away. Sasuke was good, but as they all knew, not quite good enough yet...

/Get her now and ponder later!!/ roared Kyuubi inside him, his chakra pulsating wildly. Naruto leaped forward, jerked her up and wound his arm around her waist. A few chakra-powered jumps and he was climbing up the walls, Sakura hanging on, teeth clenched.

He stopped at the top of the wall, waiting for Sasuke. The black-haired teen wasn't far behind them, even though he was slower than usual -- or maybe Naruto was so flooded with adrenaline that he couldn't keep track of their usual timing.

They slid down the great wall on the outer side to about halfway down, then let go of the chakra hold and leaped forward together. Sakura's fingers tightened on his shoulder as they landed and she hissed. "Faster!! They're on the wall!!"

He took the lead, running away from the village, Sasuke still behind him, not even checking to see in which direction he was going.

Then they were faced with a high wire fence, with warning signs all over, crackling with electricity.

"Ack!!" He was going too fast to stop, and knew from experience that the power running through the metal links was enough to stun him; there would be no climbing over that, especially not with the jounin closing in. No blasting a hole through it either, since they'd just follow them through. And it was too high to leap over.

/Want a leap, boy, then ask a leap specialist/ sneered Kyuubi in his mind. /Not that they're good at much else/

"Kuchiyose no jutsu!!" Naruto called, sparing a quick, irritated thought for the contempt in the Youko's tone. Kyuubi just could never be helpful without peppering his speech with insults and put-downs -- not that he was anything approaching helpful that often.

He'd never seen that purple frog before, but it didn't matter; it was largely big enough to carry them over the fence. He snagged Sasuke's arm as he passed, pulled him on the frog's back just as it gathered its legs, and then they were flying, only holding onto the back of his summon because he was too stubborn to let go of its kimono. Sakura's face was hidden against his neck, one of her hands reaching to hold onto the back of Sasuke's shirt; Sasuke had been thrown across Naruto's lap and had absolutely no hold on anything, only their upwards momentum keeping him in place.

For a second it felt like they were floating. And then they plummeted down, on the other side of the fence, and there was nothing in contact with his summon but the hold he had on the frog's kimono. Sakura screamed once, short and sharp just in his ear, but he didn't blame her because the sensation of freefall always twisted his stomach in such a way that he wanted to scream too, with fear and adrenaline, except he was just a little too macho to let himself.

Sasuke scrambled frantically for something to hold onto, his hands ending up grabbing the frog's obi and the sleeve of Naruto's T-shirt. He shouldn't have bothered, because he was between Naruto's body and the frog's, so he couldn't go far.

When they landed, the black-haired boy ended up crushed under his and Sakura's weight. There was a muffled, pained whimper and the blond boy quickly pushed himself in a sitting position, stunned and worried that Sasuke would ever make that sound, but the frog only stopped the briefest of times before it shot forward, to the edge of the forest. There was a brutal yank on his arm as he once again tried to keep them all on their ride.

A few kunai whizzed past, but they were going so fast that they were well hidden behind the gigantic trees of the forest well before any of their hunters could manage to aim properly.

Finally, they came to a stop -- the frog before them. It had stopped so sharply that they all tumbled over its head and on the grass. Naruto ended up at the foot of a tree, mostly on his back, except for his legs and butt that were up against the trunk. Sasuke was sprawled across his chest. We must look ridiculous, the blond teen thought with a burst of giddy, relieved amusement.

Sakura had landed flat on her front and was still grabbing a handful of his shirt. She let go and sat up slowly, still wide-eyed and frazzled.

"That was some ride, eh, Sakura-chan?" he commented with a laugh.

"Idiot," she growled back, her expression slowly coming back to normal.
Naruto nudged Sasuke. He was getting heavy, which was weird for someone as slim as he was. "Oi, you sack of bones, get off me before -- Sasuke?"

Sasuke wasn't moving. Sasuke was limp. Sasuke was not supposed to be limp.

"... Sasuke-kun?" Sakura called, her voice wavering in fear.

"... 'm okay," the black-haired boy finally answer as he pushed himself up and off Naruto's chest. But he was moving way too carefully for his teammates to believe him.

"What happened?" Naruto demanded as he kicked away from the trunk, rolling back, and landed in a neat crouch at Sakura's side.

"Nothing. Let's not stay here."

Sasuke got on his feet slowly, refusing Sakura's attempts to help him.

"Just got hit in the stomach. A little winded. Now let's MOVE."

'Che. Naruto would have carried him, but he knew that the guy wouldn't let him, probably getting himself even more hurt in the process. So he had to make do with keeping a close eye on him. Sasuke was just like him, no matter how much it hurt he wouldn't accept help before he fell flat on his face and half-knocked himself out. Stubborn idiot.

The frog was gone. He regretted it for a second, because it would have been easier to get Sasuke to ride it than to accept being carried, that and usually he liked to at least thank them before he let them go.

"We need to find a place to hide," Sakura whispered as she gave a wary look at the dark forest all around them.

"We're NOT stopping on my behalf," Sasuke growled at her, a hand pressed on his stomach.

"Oh, shut up, idiot," Naruto snapped back, aggravated by his macho bullshit.

Sasuke straightened up and glared, and Naruto felt the urge to knock him out just so he didn't risk making his eventual wound worse, but realized with surprise that one part of him was purring with approval and a touch of lust at the challenge in his black eyes. What the hell; he knew all about macho displays, having performed more than his share of them, but it didn't mean he thought it was smart. Why couldn't the stubborn bastard admit, just for once, that he was in pain and needed help and comfort?

And he had to stop glaring at him so stubbornly, it made Naruto want to kiss him until he submitted.

"It wouldn't be only on your behalf, Sasuke-kun," Sakura intervened as she kept checking the forest nervously. "We have ... things to talk out, and we couldn't talk back in town. Here, there will be less people following us and we can lay traps... But we can't go too far from Konoha or else we'll be missing-nin."

Sasuke calmed slowly at her explanation, and she gave him a shaky smile, then turned and -- visibly forcing herself-- nodded at Naruto. "It was a pretty good idea to come here, actually."

"Ahh... eh. Thank you, Sakura-chan," he replied, scratching at his blond spikes in embarrassment. He hadn't been thinking when he'd chosen that direction; he had just known that he wanted to run until he found a place to hide, someplace he could protect. This forest seemed just perfect to him, but he remembered the creatures living in here from their chuunin exam and it wasn't a place for Sakura to wander alone... nor for Sasuke, not in his state.

"So... We should find a place to sleep, and then some food, and then..."

He hesitated, glanced at his teammates, then rubbed his sweaty palms on his pants nervously.

"Then we talk," Sakura replied softly.

"... Yeah... then we talk."

He was not looking forward to it.

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[identity profile] reiichi.livejournal.com 2004-10-05 09:31 am (UTC)(link)
Nice chapter ^^
I wish I could write that quickly >_
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[identity profile] reiichi.livejournal.com 2004-10-06 04:07 am (UTC)(link)
But I'm particularly slow.
Slow like ten lines per hour - yep, I'm a perfectionnist.
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[identity profile] reiichi.livejournal.com 2004-10-06 01:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Ten lines is when I feel inspired.
Which happens about twice a year :P

Love it!

[identity profile] sanjuno.livejournal.com 2004-10-05 10:33 am (UTC)(link)
I love all your stuff. I wish I could turn out fics as well loved as yours. I'm torn between seething jelousy over your talent and giddy pleasure over being able to read what your talent produces. Again, I love it!

Re: Love it!

[identity profile] sanjuno.livejournal.com 2004-10-06 03:47 pm (UTC)(link)
=^-^= mew! Ooo... am feeling loved myself now. Also want to say that your characterization is awsome. Just one sudden thought struck me, we have seen Naruto's Kyubi! voice in action (and planning action against the council. Muwahaha!) will we get to see Inner!Sakura come out to play? I love Inner!Sakura, she's funny and I can't help but picture the reaction of the adults to Sakura letting loose on them. ^-^ Hee... still, the whole series is chock full of people with little (or big) voices in the back of their heads. It's no wonder all the characters have issues... Meh, I still love it! Hope you stay happy! =^-^= mew!

[identity profile] joosetta.livejournal.com 2004-10-05 11:37 am (UTC)(link)
I just do it to annoy you >.> I mean. I love this chapter so-- because it shows them as a team again, and it shows the protectiveness, and kickassness and grumpy Sasukeness and. Also Naruto wanted to kiss Sasuke, and I adore that ;; And also! The point about Kakashi is SO TRUEE! Ahaha, I lovelovelove.

[identity profile] stitched-scars.livejournal.com 2004-10-05 05:02 pm (UTC)(link)
*___* so pretty....
actually, I'm starting to watch Naruto because of your fics, they interest me so. XP

"And he had to stop glaring at him so stubbornly, it made Naruto want to kiss him until he submitted." <-- *squeals*

I would've commented on all your other posts... but I got lazy. Heh. As in all your fics, I really like how you convey what the characters are thinking. ^^

[identity profile] kayryn666.livejournal.com 2004-10-05 07:17 pm (UTC)(link)
NNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGG!!!!! *pokes you* Write more!!!! MOOORE!!! I WANNA HEAR THE TALK!!!

Okay, now that that's out of my system...

I enjoyed this part a great great deal. I cannot wait to read the next as for some reason I cannot seem to read action and sit through it, but I can read the long boring talks that make characters angsty and such without flinching or even losing interest.

LUFF LUFF WRITE MORE!@

oh, and I'm working on getting AIM!!! I really am!

[identity profile] kayryn666.livejournal.com 2004-10-06 03:09 pm (UTC)(link)
YAY! *nances*


...I need the site. -_-;;

[identity profile] rianax.livejournal.com 2004-10-07 10:41 am (UTC)(link)
You have cemented my love of SasuSakuNaru. The rivalry, the lust, the relationship between them makes me want to curl up and purr like a catniped kitten.

*gives you lots and lots of huggles*