I like that with the "in heat" thing it's pretty much dubcon from both sides. Karkat didn't want to be triggered hardcore by a bunch of troll-shaped people, but the troll-shaped people didn't really plan on having lots of sex with an alien boy on pain of causing him brain-destroying fever either. D; (cause really I couldn't write any of the human guys as uncaring rapists, that'd just be ooc. >__>; )
The alone at night thing is, well, this Paul is still a very good father who would never hurt his child and is not at all into incest. He just also happens to like them jailbaity. D: The aspect I like the most is that the trolls come out feeling insanely relieved and even somewhat grateful because Paul was so nice to them and even bothered to make them feel good when he could, but that doesn't make it not dubcon at best. They thought their choice was offer sex or have sex taken from and then being given violence and he didn't really disabuse them of that. :/ Okay they didn't actually get to discuss it so he could pretend he thought they honestly wanted it... >__>;
Though they're way confused when he's all "tell me if i hurt you so i can stop" and they're all "why?" and don't really wrap their brains around the "I don't find it sexy" and he has to add that "also it shows a gross lack of skills" before they can accept it. XD;
The pale relationship is definitely confused and awkward for a little bit. XD
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I like that with the "in heat" thing it's pretty much dubcon from both sides. Karkat didn't want to be triggered hardcore by a bunch of troll-shaped people, but the troll-shaped people didn't really plan on having lots of sex with an alien boy on pain of causing him brain-destroying fever either. D; (cause really I couldn't write any of the human guys as uncaring rapists, that'd just be ooc. >__>; )
The alone at night thing is, well, this Paul is still a very good father who would never hurt his child and is not at all into incest. He just also happens to like them jailbaity. D: The aspect I like the most is that the trolls come out feeling insanely relieved and even somewhat grateful because Paul was so nice to them and even bothered to make them feel good when he could, but that doesn't make it not dubcon at best. They thought their choice was offer sex or have sex taken from and then being given violence and he didn't really disabuse them of that. :/ Okay they didn't actually get to discuss it so he could pretend he thought they honestly wanted it... >__>;
Though they're way confused when he's all "tell me if i hurt you so i can stop" and they're all "why?" and don't really wrap their brains around the "I don't find it sexy" and he has to add that "also it shows a gross lack of skills" before they can accept it. XD;
The pale relationship is definitely confused and awkward for a little bit. XD