I. Absolutely. Agree. Sunhawk should be winning a Pulitzer's for her fanfiction. And shame to you, 'Suka. You should know better. .... And now I am itching to read some more Sunhawk. ....It's a good thing I've got most of her long stuff saved to a word doc so I can read it whenever I want. Come to think of it, I don't think I have Rain saved yet. Hmm. Anyway. I know how it goes, I've got a similar problem. It's easy to figure out how you want a story to begin and end ... it's filling in in-between that can get complicated. So many different ways you can route the story to get to the same end. Good luck.