I really loved Sasuke's mine moment, and that he knows that while for him it's over his dead body, for Sakura it is over the attacker's dead body.

Sakura's glee over the war fans was adorable. I hope Naruto tells Sasuke about it later.

A couple tiny nits:

I swear my part of the guest list is like ten times the length of his, and then again only because we let him have Kakashi-sensei.

I think that works better if you leave out the "again".

Sasuke smacked the package he was holding in Naruto's hands, still without quite making eye contact.

I think that should be "into Naruto's hands".