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mme_hardy ([personal profile] mme_hardy) wrote in [personal profile] askerian 2015-03-05 08:15 pm (UTC)

This has such wonderful repartee and I like the tension of the dialogue. More good bits:

"Maybe Oglogoth's Drool," Rose muses, "but then again, who wouldn't."



He lifts his chin in defiance, as if he's daring them to get rid of him now, since he knows they'll do it sooner or later.

Dirk's eyes are cold like he's already decided when.

Brrrrr.

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