FWIW, I think you managed to hit the Sollux mark reasonably well; it's not the most perfect characterization I've ever seen, but it's well within the limits of believability.
Frankly, the only parts of this that even came close to tripping me up (in the ways that bad characterization or stretching-suspension-of-disbelief can) were the "tech talk" around the Sollux-vs.-Roxy "hacking" sequence, and those aren't likely to be a problem for most people; I work in IT, and the nitty-gritty of computer stuff is at least a third of my entire life.
I really like the use of "". It hadn't even occurred to me that that symbol would be in the Unicode set, but since it is, it seems inexplicable that it isn't used that way all across the fandom.
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Frankly, the only parts of this that even came close to tripping me up (in the ways that bad characterization or stretching-suspension-of-disbelief can) were the "tech talk" around the Sollux-vs.-Roxy "hacking" sequence, and those aren't likely to be a problem for most people; I work in IT, and the nitty-gritty of computer stuff is at least a third of my entire life.
I really like the use of "". It hadn't even occurred to me that that symbol would be in the Unicode set, but since it is, it seems inexplicable that it isn't used that way all across the fandom.