EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! ^____________^ oh man, I LOVE the detailing. The lines that got omaked both hit me pretty hard in the original, but I love your hand with exposition-drops too - Cid checking the sun before his watch, to make sure he'd changed the time zone on his watch right! Cid is totally the only one of them who'd do that, and he WOULD, too. And Tifa Carefully Not Commenting about Cloud having a crush. And Cloud being so relieved to have someone else take over -- and thinking so dispassionately about what it would take to knock him out if Sephiroth was taking him over...

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