ext_172383 ([identity profile] quoth-the-ravyn.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] askerian 2011-01-10 08:03 pm (UTC)

Things I loved:

'Sakura and Tsunade smile identical, 'you are amusing me, little man, and you will never know why or how' smiles.'

'yucky leaf juice'

"One can sure as hell try," Naruto counters without having to even think twice, and he stares at him right in the eye because like fuck he is going to bend on that.


and!

'because he's got the best grandma-type Hokage right now and he's going to have the best advisor girl ever.'


But really, it was the 'yucky leaf juice' that made me laugh out loud. Because your inner-naruto is so, so perfect. I really like how you have played with Sakura's book smarts and applied them to how she interacts with people. (Something that we see a lot in our friends around us, but something you don't really see applied to her character as a whole.) This is a rather brilliant little piece of awesome characterization. Great job!

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