Man, everyone who has commented before was right, but as creepy as that was I still loved it. I am so chuffed that you wrote even half of my prompt!

I was quite put off balance by Itachi being the woman at first; kind of embarrassed that I got it wrong, but then you reversed it. That was satisfying. This is quite the disturbing story, but at the same time so absorbing.

Sasuke is so messed up here, obsessed with his brother to be point of nearly(?) raping him. That obsession does not change, except in expression, as the story progresses. Itachi's forehead flick expresses more than forgiveness, I think. He feels his own sort of attachment, and couldn't give Sasuke up anymore than Sasuke could him. It was a real release of tension to read that one moment of levity.

Thanks for writing!