Someone wrote in [personal profile] askerian 2010-07-06 02:59 am (UTC)

Quite excellent. I can't speak for whether the tone is too different from last chapter's end, but this is angst the way I like it; the hurty parts are interspersed with comedy and Ino being herself.

And thanks for including Gaara, for he is awesome.

Oh, and I also liked the Temari-Ino-Shika foreshadowing. I still say Chouji should get in on that somehow, but that's neither here nor there.

-- Guile

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