I was going to do my best to leave a long review, you know, copypasting my favorite bits and commenting on them, but it's all so very important and well-written that I wouldn't know where to begin.

I do know the feeling of not being entirely happy with what you wrote, because you want it to be perfect, but as far as I'm concerned this is plenty perfect already. It's sweet and it's powerful and it made me squee, and it's really damn ironic that Sasuke gets all mushy and soft-eyed at Sakura going all *RAGE*... It's wonderful.