the medic-nin told Sakura "no more of that chakra" - does he mean kyubii?
i wonder how this will affect Sakura? (wasn't her chakra "not enough" to keep both her and the baby healthy?)

loved the way you described Sasuke. As somebody already mentioned it was great to see him live in the present right now and not in the past (took him long enough) - and the part where he thought that MAYBE he could be the father of this child made me sigh - great written.

great Sakura development!!!

thanks for writing =)