ext_3745 ([identity profile] proanon.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] askerian 2010-05-25 12:29 pm (UTC)

...oh man. He's going to tell them about the conditions for Mangekyo. And possibly the other Uchiha secrets he learned at the family shrine.

That will be interesting.

This is a wonderful scene, just so you know. Especially the part where he tries to be angry, he wants to be angry, and something else is getting in the way. But I think probably my favorite part was when he realized he was thinking of Sakura as his wife and Naruto as... well, something like that; lifemate, perhaps. And he just sums it up with, "Alright. Yes."

...thus implicitly deciding that they are more important than Itachi.

Eee.

(Two quick stumbling blocks: you're angry at someone, not against. And I think "All right" is technically supposed to be two words, although I've never been quite clear on the specifics there.)

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