Omgosh, I love this scene. You have such a good grip on what a fourteen year old boy should sound like. And the last bit between Tifa and Denzel...well done. It's exactly how I imagine they would butt heads.
Tifa gave Cloud a strange look. "That ... depends on what we decide," she said cautiously, like she was reminding him.
Cloud's shoulders tensed up. He turned away to look through the window. "... Of course."
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Tifa gave Cloud a strange look. "That ... depends on what we decide," she said cautiously, like she was reminding him.
Cloud's shoulders tensed up. He turned away to look through the window. "... Of course."
Haa, I adored that. OH CLOUD. OH TIFA. OH EVERYONE <3
I love this story so muuuch, I'm so glad you updated! :3