ext_304647 ([identity profile] cheapriboflavin.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] askerian 2010-03-14 10:41 pm (UTC)

Wow. I am amazed. That was wonderful to read. The details were really nice, too. Especially the last line.

She kept tracing her hand back and forth on the axe's long handle, where it rested across her lap. The wood was warm under her hand.

That kind of nervous gesture makes everything seem very real.

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