ext_183539 ([identity profile] garmiet.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] askerian 2009-11-10 01:57 am (UTC)

(I review as I read.)

Still Sasuke's POV, then? ____ Oh yeah, the kids. (*groan*) And I'm sure things can only get uglier. ____ I wonder if Sasuke's too emotionally drained to deal with the horror right now. And if he'll feel it later. ____ Love it how he picks up the grisly details of the scene: Sakura's voice, the blood, a child down ... I mean, from one thing right to another! ____ Wait, whuh? He just ... woke up? ... The hell? õ.ô That's one thing I wasn't expecting. ____ My bad, it was the healer who died. (I kept getting the Grass team's roles mixed up.) >.< ____ Yeesh, that kid's in a rough predicament. I hope they can save him somehow. ____ Love the way Sasuke's taking charge. ____ Interesting. Sasuke's abilities with electricity comes in handy. =) ____ "Stubborn." Love it. ^^

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