"He was still furious with himself for not understanding it faster." Lol. Must be even harder considering that this sort of thing happened the last time he took this test. ^^; Ah, and here's that scene I read last week. ____ I'm switching back and forth between the old version and the new of this scene. So far, I like the changes. (Both versions seemed good to me, though.) ____ I like the change to the ending of it, especially. Oh yeah, I forgot there were jounin wandering around the forest as part of the test. Now Sasuke's earlier thought at the beginning of this scene makes sense (to me) again. ^^; ____ Maybe the jounin are really good at hiding from Sasuke. Could be he's kind of distracted and keeps missing them. ____ Heh--I can't tell if Green-hair's awake or not. ____ "He'd tried to hold onto the cat. He shouldn't have." And so, this wisdom shall eventually be passed on to Suigetsu, whenever Sasuke may find him.... Or Suigetsu will just learn the hard way. ^^ Yay, love the kitty. ♥ ____ What the hell happened? I'm guessing the cat caught Kyuubi's scent and freaked. Otherwise I'm not clear on why the cat bolted. ... Ohhhhhhh. The Grass team got attacked, the cat was alerted and ran back to help, and the summoner died.... Wow. Devastating. ____ And we learn "green-hair's" name is Kon. ^^ ____ I like the mental picture of Sasuke supporting Kon. Just makes a cool mental image. =) ____ Yeah, I can imagine Sasuke not feeling too comfortable in this situation. (And that's putting it very mildly.) ____ "Fuck you. You shouldn't be hauling around a useless bag of meat." Jeez, that's your TEAMMATE, dude! Then again, I can understand that they're in a desperate situation and he's probably trying to concentrate through the pain. ____ "I do not care what your kind does." (?) There's something hidden there.... ____ I like the way Kon tries to persuade her, though. ____ Love the rising drama. ____ Good suggestion, Sasuke. This scene is awesome! ____ Hehehe, love Sasuke's mental grouching. XD ____ "It wasn't guilt. More like... responsibility." Really good line. Love that. ____ Whoa, cool! A Scroll of Summoning?! A contract?! O.O ____ "It really hurts my pride when a goddamn Konoha bastard does me that kind of charity. So take the fucking scroll because I don't want to owe you a thing." Good line. ____ I gotta be blunt: Zenko is kind of a bitch
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"He was still furious with himself for not understanding it faster." Lol. Must be even harder considering that this sort of thing happened the last time he took this test. ^^; Ah, and here's that scene I read last week. ____ I'm switching back and forth between the old version and the new of this scene. So far, I like the changes. (Both versions seemed good to me, though.) ____ I like the change to the ending of it, especially. Oh yeah, I forgot there were jounin wandering around the forest as part of the test. Now Sasuke's earlier thought at the beginning of this scene makes sense (to me) again. ^^; ____ Maybe the jounin are really good at hiding from Sasuke. Could be he's kind of distracted and keeps missing them. ____ Heh--I can't tell if Green-hair's awake or not. ____ "He'd tried to hold onto the cat. He shouldn't have." And so, this wisdom shall eventually be passed on to Suigetsu, whenever Sasuke may find him.... Or Suigetsu will just learn the hard way. ^^ Yay, love the kitty. ♥ ____ What the hell happened? I'm guessing the cat caught Kyuubi's scent and freaked. Otherwise I'm not clear on why the cat bolted. ... <i>Ohhhhhhh</i>. The Grass team got attacked, the cat was alerted and ran back to help, and the summoner died.... Wow. Devastating. ____ And we learn "green-hair's" name is Kon. ^^ ____ I like the mental picture of Sasuke supporting Kon. Just makes a cool mental image. =) ____ Yeah, I can imagine Sasuke not feeling too comfortable in this situation. (And that's putting it very mildly.) ____ "Fuck you. You shouldn't be hauling around a useless bag of meat." Jeez, that's your TEAMMATE, dude! Then again, I can understand that they're in a desperate situation and he's probably trying to concentrate through the pain. ____ "I do not care what your kind does." (?) There's something hidden there.... ____ I like the way Kon tries to persuade her, though. ____ Love the rising drama. ____ Good suggestion, Sasuke. This scene is awesome! ____ Hehehe, love Sasuke's mental grouching. XD ____ "It wasn't guilt. More like... responsibility." Really good line. Love that. ____ Whoa, cool! A Scroll of Summoning?! A <i>contract</i>?! O.O ____ "It <i>really</i> hurts my pride when a goddamn Konoha bastard does me that kind of <i>charity</i>. So take the fucking scroll because I don't want to owe you a thing." Good line. ____ I gotta be blunt: Zenko is kind of a bitch <small)(sorry!)</small>. But I like her. ____ "He wasn't sure what use would a housecat be to him... Maybe one of Naruto or Sakura's friends would want it." Makes me look forward to the day he uses it. =)
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"He was still furious with himself for not understanding it faster." Lol. Must be even harder considering that this sort of thing happened the last time he took this test. ^^;
Ah, and here's that scene I read last week. ____ I'm switching back and forth between the old version and the new of this scene. So far, I like the changes. (Both versions seemed good to me, though.) ____ I like the change to the ending of it, especially.
Oh yeah, I forgot there were jounin wandering around the forest as part of the test. Now Sasuke's earlier thought at the beginning of this scene makes sense (to me) again. ^^; ____ Maybe the jounin are really good at hiding from Sasuke. Could be he's kind of distracted and keeps missing them. ____ Heh--I can't tell if Green-hair's awake or not. ____ "He'd tried to hold onto the cat. He shouldn't have." And so, this wisdom shall eventually be passed on to Suigetsu, whenever Sasuke may find him.... Or Suigetsu will just learn the hard way. ^^
Yay, love the kitty. ♥ ____ What the hell happened? I'm guessing the cat caught Kyuubi's scent and freaked. Otherwise I'm not clear on why the cat bolted.
... Ohhhhhhh. The Grass team got attacked, the cat was alerted and ran back to help, and the summoner died.... Wow. Devastating. ____ And we learn "green-hair's" name is Kon. ^^ ____ I like the mental picture of Sasuke supporting Kon. Just makes a cool mental image. =) ____ Yeah, I can imagine Sasuke not feeling too comfortable in this situation. (And that's putting it very mildly.) ____ "Fuck you. You shouldn't be hauling around a useless bag of meat." Jeez, that's your TEAMMATE, dude! Then again, I can understand that they're in a desperate situation and he's probably trying to concentrate through the pain. ____ "I do not care what your kind does." (?) There's something hidden there.... ____ I like the way Kon tries to persuade her, though. ____ Love the rising drama. ____ Good suggestion, Sasuke. This scene is awesome! ____ Hehehe, love Sasuke's mental grouching. XD ____ "It wasn't guilt. More like... responsibility." Really good line. Love that. ____ Whoa, cool! A Scroll of Summoning?! A contract?! O.O ____ "It really hurts my pride when a goddamn Konoha bastard does me that kind of charity. So take the fucking scroll because I don't want to owe you a thing." Good line. ____ I gotta be blunt: Zenko is kind of a bitch
"He was still furious with himself for not understanding it faster." Lol. Must be even harder considering that this sort of thing happened the last time he took this test. ^^;
Ah, and here's that scene I read last week. ____ I'm switching back and forth between the old version and the new of this scene. So far, I like the changes. (Both versions seemed good to me, though.) ____ I like the change to the ending of it, especially.
Oh yeah, I forgot there were jounin wandering around the forest as part of the test. Now Sasuke's earlier thought at the beginning of this scene makes sense (to me) again. ^^; ____ Maybe the jounin are really good at hiding from Sasuke. Could be he's kind of distracted and keeps missing them. ____ Heh--I can't tell if Green-hair's awake or not. ____ "He'd tried to hold onto the cat. He shouldn't have." And so, this wisdom shall eventually be passed on to Suigetsu, whenever Sasuke may find him.... Or Suigetsu will just learn the hard way. ^^
Yay, love the kitty. ♥ ____ What the hell happened? I'm guessing the cat caught Kyuubi's scent and freaked. Otherwise I'm not clear on why the cat bolted.
... <i>Ohhhhhhh</i>. The Grass team got attacked, the cat was alerted and ran back to help, and the summoner died.... Wow. Devastating. ____ And we learn "green-hair's" name is Kon. ^^ ____ I like the mental picture of Sasuke supporting Kon. Just makes a cool mental image. =) ____ Yeah, I can imagine Sasuke not feeling too comfortable in this situation. (And that's putting it very mildly.) ____ "Fuck you. You shouldn't be hauling around a useless bag of meat." Jeez, that's your TEAMMATE, dude! Then again, I can understand that they're in a desperate situation and he's probably trying to concentrate through the pain. ____ "I do not care what your kind does." (?) There's something hidden there.... ____ I like the way Kon tries to persuade her, though. ____ Love the rising drama. ____ Good suggestion, Sasuke. This scene is awesome! ____ Hehehe, love Sasuke's mental grouching. XD ____ "It wasn't guilt. More like... responsibility." Really good line. Love that. ____ Whoa, cool! A Scroll of Summoning?! A <i>contract</i>?! O.O ____ "It <i>really</i> hurts my pride when a goddamn Konoha bastard does me that kind of <i>charity</i>. So take the fucking scroll because I don't want to owe you a thing." Good line. ____ I gotta be blunt: Zenko is kind of a bitch <small)(sorry!)</small>. But I like her. ____ "He wasn't sure what use would a housecat be to him... Maybe one of Naruto or Sakura's friends would want it." Makes me look forward to the day he uses it. =)