aha! You know, the first time I read it I thought it was Aeris, but then I wasn't sure, and I did a second read for the betaing, and then I thought 'hmm maybe it's Cloud since he was the one who was tempted to let him look out the window,' so yeah a 'here's who's talking' would be handy. I totally know how that goes -- when the dialogue makes perfect sense in my head because I hear their voices so of course I know which of them is speaking, and it takes somebody who doesn't already know which of them is speaking to catch stuff like that because to the author it's obvious? Glad to be useful, anyway! ^__^