This my fifth DBZ fan ficition I think, because all the others I saw were so nightmare inducers that I stayed out of the fandom.
I really, really like your writing style, you kept the characters IC and somehow you always make them shine even more.
You kept Bardock alive (and many other Saiyas) and I adore you for that, also you kept Goku's tail. I really never saw the point of taking it off (Goku after all had mastered his only weakness */rant).
There's a part that really got my attention: When Bardock told Goku to never read him again like that. All in all, I'm looking forward to this AU very much.
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I really, really like your writing style, you kept the characters IC and somehow you always make them shine even more.
You kept Bardock alive (and many other Saiyas) and I adore you for that, also you kept Goku's tail. I really never saw the point of taking it off (Goku after all had mastered his only weakness */rant).
There's a part that really got my attention: When Bardock told Goku to never read him again like that. All in all, I'm looking forward to this AU very much.