"Jin shivered again, and again told himself asshole he-men were only the guys that his usual mission-persona pretended to like."

That sentence is a little funny. I had to re-read it like..5 times to get what you're trying to say.

But other than that....lulz. XD Horny!Sasuke. XDD OH dear. Why didn't he go to Naruto and Sakura for 'help'? Kyuu!Naru would sure work it off...and then some XDD