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2009-01-10 06:01 am (UTC)
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Hahahahaha, oh man, awesooooome. Had me giggling out loud at more than one point.
Couple typos, not grammar stuff, just looks like letter misplacement.
When the little squalling thing was taken out he was allowed to stagged off into the waiting room,
stagger instead of stagged I think.
Kakashi waited until the voic of the protesting pre-teen had faded in the distance,
left the "e" off voice.
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Couple typos, not grammar stuff, just looks like letter misplacement.
When the little squalling thing was taken out he was allowed to stagged off into the waiting room,
stagger instead of stagged I think.
Kakashi waited until the voic of the protesting pre-teen had faded in the distance,
left the "e" off voice.