Actually, discussing it with someone could help. ^^ But it's not going to be just a "fix what's there" job, i'm still at the stage where I'm trying to build the underlying structure of the fic. (though the chunk that's already written could do with some normal betaing, too. XD) I was just planning to end the scene some way and timeskip to something else, but then Bardock wanted to hang out with Chichi of all people, and that means I need help developing what on earth could happen there. Blah.