Read through your other reviews so far and you might not need as much help now. Also, it made me realize that I need to fess up: I will NOT be much help for Aerith and Zack's characterization. ^.^;; I could never get into Aerith's head; I was more of a Tifa fan.*L* And Tifa, well, you're already writing her beautifully. Tifa and Cloud have the advantage of Advent Children being around for reference material, on top of the game. *noddles* A lot of my recent Aerith experience comes from the Kingdom Hearts games, so, frankly, my memories of her are a little skewed. XD

GRAMMAR, however... yeah, that I can help with. ^_^ And I can at least question parts to make you think about it and rationalize, like you have so far below with some of the characterization questions and comments. Do you want me to work with what you have posted here, or do you have something altered that you'd want to email me?