^___^ Bah, if it's just a typo I'll find it, right now i'm more concerned with characterization. It's hard to handle four people I haven't written much before. (oh, it's going to be so delightful when I have to write a goddamn war council with all of Avalanche, or the fivesome + Denzel... not. DX )

I think, but I'm not sure, that the problem with Aeris in this part is that she's not really consistent with herself. Also Tifa doesn't give enough insight to even guess what goes on in her head, so Aeris kinda comes across as random/shallow? I don't know, I can't tell. I always liked Aeris better, but when I sink into Tifa POV I stop being able to read her. Stupid cryptic Ancient meanie. >:( Here I thought Tifa would be the hardest one to characterize.

I should probably let it rest a few days, maybe i'll be able to see the problems then... hn.

Thank you, thank you~ ^_______^