ext_125415 ([identity profile] sara-the-lazy.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] askerian 2007-10-21 09:27 pm (UTC)

Squeee! Orochimaru appears!!! Can't believe I'm the first one to mention that :) I really like Kabuto in this, it's nice to have him more involved.

Sasuke and Sakura's discussion about Naruto is certainly intriguing. I like the dialogue and their interactions.

Glad you were able to get back to Crossed wires and do such a nice job of it! This flows nicely from the last chapter and is certainly well-written, as usual.

~Sara

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