It took me a second to get the 'sat in his axe as a kid' joke. But when I did, it was fairly clever. I'd love to see where this is going, especially considering its such an odd universe you've put them in.
Sasuke's annoyed attitude is funny as hell.
The last 'scene' with Sasuke getting in the cab was a pretty doomy cliffhanger.
No nitpicking to be done here.
+J+