Pretend to have fallen for her name-change trick -- she might actually be ashamed of herself for the plagiarism. Unlikely, but might.
Inform her that polite requests get one freebie beta (ONE), but you ARE going to be as harsh on her as you would be on yourself. Repeat the warning several times, with various humble phrases, and provide ample space for her to click out no-harm-no-foul.
Beta. Be as free with scathing commentary as you want. Spork the basic scenario, the characterization, the spelling, the grammar, the A/N's, the pointless self-insert chat. REVEL IN YOUR EVIL AND HARD-WON GOOD WRITING SKILLS.
If she returns to ask for a second beta, she's a masochist.
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Inform her that polite requests get one freebie beta (ONE), but you ARE going to be as harsh on her as you would be on yourself. Repeat the warning several times, with various humble phrases, and provide ample space for her to click out no-harm-no-foul.
Beta. Be as free with scathing commentary as you want. Spork the basic scenario, the characterization, the spelling, the grammar, the A/N's, the pointless self-insert chat. REVEL IN YOUR EVIL AND HARD-WON GOOD WRITING SKILLS.
If she returns to ask for a second beta, she's a masochist.