ext_266996 ([identity profile] ina-noranaya.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] askerian 2006-11-13 03:38 am (UTC)

Aaaw, Naruto. *slaps him for even thinking he wouldn't be needed* And he would want to listen in to Sakura and Sasuke having a personal conversation (That is, Sakura pouring out her soul while Sasuke grunts in acknowledgment). But I can't say I'd blame him. And it's cute how he feels the need to keep an eye on them all the time. Naruto is protective of his teammates, eh?

One grammar thing:
From that moment on, all thoughts of the dirty ring in the middle of the ceiling where heretofore abandoned. Were, not where. And I'm not sure you're allowed to use heretofore like that, but it's a neat word anyway. (Dropping it would keep the meaning and make more sense grammatically, but it wouldn't have quite the same "oomph". And using words like that is fun.)

And I so want in on that Nation Molest Asuka Day.

Poetry project that I'm supposed to be working on? What's that? ^__^




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