Hot damn! Very good! two chapters in a week? ohh yeah baby.
I'm really interested in hearing about Liadan's pod and social ethics. she brings it up often in comparison to Arun that it makes one very curious.
The switch in POV was very good, IMHO. It contrasted in a good way with Liadan's way of thinking, made it seem very real and very amusing. I love the way he thinks. His way of speaking coupled with his obvious awe is funny in a good way.
EEK, and the plot thickens!!! ohh I'm excited to see more of this world. its so original; i can imagine it being published one day! I'm eager to read more of it leik whoa! ^_^ Great job Asuka! +J+
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I'm really interested in hearing about Liadan's pod and social ethics. she brings it up often in comparison to Arun that it makes one very curious.
The switch in POV was very good, IMHO. It contrasted in a good way with Liadan's way of thinking, made it seem very real and very amusing. I love the way he thinks. His way of speaking coupled with his obvious awe is funny in a good way.
EEK, and the plot thickens!!! ohh I'm excited to see more of this world. its so original; i can imagine it being published one day! I'm eager to read more of it leik whoa! ^_^ Great job Asuka!
+J+