I realy do like this story. The sotry itself is a slice of life or to say it different a slice of civilianlife through sakura's eyes, yet you haven't discarded her being a ninja and that is very present in the story with out detracting it. You also don't get bogged down in the mundane just enough to give the feel but not enough to make me yawn and want to go to sleep.
On top of all that, i don't know if it is the tone or the sentence phrasing or they way you put it together, but the story itself feels very much of those idealic summer days with crytal blue skys, sparkling water, bright thick green grass being tosseld by the breeze, crisp sheets on the line and sand between the toes, all those things that you look back at fondly through distorted glasses from summer vacations. But the effect isn't heavy handed.
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On top of all that, i don't know if it is the tone or the sentence phrasing or they way you put it together, but the story itself feels very much of those idealic summer days with crytal blue skys, sparkling water, bright thick green grass being tosseld by the breeze, crisp sheets on the line and sand between the toes, all those things that you look back at fondly through distorted glasses from summer vacations. But the effect isn't heavy handed.