ext_197003 ([identity profile] decorchan.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] askerian 2006-02-07 06:30 am (UTC)

Great! I loved the kid's reaction to each other and Heero only stitching his own wounds. ;___; The puppey was much love < 333 and Heero was so puzzled XD

I don't know if you intended this, but Duo says 'got' two times in dialog when he should have said "What she get scared of this time" and "She has problems". I have a feeling you meant for this to be this way and I'm just being a grammar nazi again. D:
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