Ohh you're right, i need a Jiraiya scene, and stuff about how even though jiraiya doesn't take him away for three years he still trains him whenever he can. thanks for reminding me.
I can definitely add a shared dream -- you mean between the two visits? That could work.
Comfortable, sprawled on soft fur covering warm, squirming bodies. He doesn't care if he's squishing his littermates. They're making him a bumpy nest on which to drape himself. When one of them whines and tries to squirm free, he nips. And then they yelp -- especially since it's hard to say which ear belongs to which sibling, and sometimes he misses and they all start fighting. They tumble against each other until they get tired out and he wins again, and then he sprawls on them and naps and then does it again. It's fun.
He wakes up face down on his bed, upper body on his pillow, legs on the bunched up blankets, the mattress bumpy from piles of clothes he was too tired to put away. His back aches like a son of a bitch, and he's got the headache from hell. The worst, though, is that he's jealous of Kyuubi, because if that wasn't just his subconscious fucking with him, he didn't start life in loneliness.
And the bastard already abused them back then.
He wonders if the fox regrets, now. He wonders if he can even feel regret.
Naruto calls himself a bleeding heart, and tries to forget about it. He needs an aspirin now.
think this would fit between them?
Sasuke can be cute, but by god don't tell him XD
HAH!! check a previous reply and you'll get a mating dream all right -- and i'm trying to twist another one so that it starts with Kyuubi fighting with a male fox, and then fucking him, and then it should melt into Naruto ending up on top of Sasuke and being very very confused by the revelation that some males can be fucktoys too. XD Sadly so far I'm not finding the right angle, but i'll keep trying ^___^
Hm; naruto learning about Oro -- i don't know, it sounds more like a scene that should be from Sasuke's POV. naruto doesn't care so long as he's truly gone and can't take away sasuke anymore. I could mention it more though. I'll think on it ^__^
Ah, good advice. It's just that I want to write, so I open old stuff hoping to get inspired -- and then nothing comes. maybe you're right, i should get the inspiration first and then open them or else i won't be able to stand to read them again XD
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Ohh you're right, i need a Jiraiya scene, and stuff about how even though jiraiya doesn't take him away for three years he still trains him whenever he can. thanks for reminding me.
I can definitely add a shared dream -- you mean between the two visits? That could work.
Comfortable, sprawled on soft fur covering warm, squirming bodies. He doesn't care if he's squishing his littermates. They're making him a bumpy nest on which to drape himself. When one of them whines and tries to squirm free, he nips. And then they yelp -- especially since it's hard to say which ear belongs to which sibling, and sometimes he misses and they all start fighting. They tumble against each other until they get tired out and he wins again, and then he sprawls on them and naps and then does it again. It's fun.
He wakes up face down on his bed, upper body on his pillow, legs on the bunched up blankets, the mattress bumpy from piles of clothes he was too tired to put away. His back aches like a son of a bitch, and he's got the headache from hell. The worst, though, is that he's jealous of Kyuubi, because if that wasn't just his subconscious fucking with him, he didn't start life in loneliness.
And the bastard already abused them back then.
He wonders if the fox regrets, now. He wonders if he can even feel regret.
Naruto calls himself a bleeding heart, and tries to forget about it. He needs an aspirin now.
think this would fit between them?
Sasuke can be cute, but by god don't tell him XD
HAH!! check a previous reply and you'll get a mating dream all right -- and i'm trying to twist another one so that it starts with Kyuubi fighting with a male fox, and then fucking him, and then it should melt into Naruto ending up on top of Sasuke and being very very confused by the revelation that some males can be fucktoys too. XD Sadly so far I'm not finding the right angle, but i'll keep trying ^___^
Hm; naruto learning about Oro -- i don't know, it sounds more like a scene that should be from Sasuke's POV. naruto doesn't care so long as he's truly gone and can't take away sasuke anymore. I could mention it more though. I'll think on it ^__^
Ah, good advice. It's just that I want to write, so I open old stuff hoping to get inspired -- and then nothing comes. maybe you're right, i should get the inspiration first and then open them or else i won't be able to stand to read them again XD