Hurm..... sorry, I think I'm just about useless too, when it comes to giving that Divine Poke of Inspiration.

The Naruto/Kyuubi thing is going hella good (you made my brain bleed a few time there, but that's ok). I love how you show the Kyuubi's growing effect on Naruto. And that part where he's thinking about Hinata, but not wanting to let go of his team is pretty good, too.

Go Asuka!

(Hope that helps. A little.) :p