mmmm happy fiction. I'm totally no help except to shout general encouragment: GO YOU.
I'm really liking the Kyuubi-Naruto thing you're working on. Sasuke's distance (almost absence) hurts but is necessary (random hahaha at Kakashi and Sasuke smacking each other with sharingan; I hadn't thought about that). Nothing's ever easy with him, is it? I'd like to see more of the rebuilding relationship, getting the team to the happy (porny) interaction they have in the night before, but I fancy all of that is coming up later.
And I'm loving the slow build-up of sexual tension that will lead to Kyuubi's crazy night of sexsexsex with Sakura and Sasuke (ahhhhh dom!Tsunade. AHH THE VISUALS, EEK). What's possibly even better is Naruto's almost-identifying with the demon in lines like: They sit in the dark for a long time, waiting.
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I'm really liking the Kyuubi-Naruto thing you're working on. Sasuke's distance (almost absence) hurts but is necessary (random hahaha at Kakashi and Sasuke smacking each other with sharingan; I hadn't thought about that). Nothing's ever easy with him, is it? I'd like to see more of the rebuilding relationship, getting the team to the happy (porny) interaction they have in the night before, but I fancy all of that is coming up later.
And I'm loving the slow build-up of sexual tension that will lead to Kyuubi's crazy night of sexsexsex with Sakura and Sasuke (ahhhhh dom!Tsunade. AHH THE VISUALS, EEK). What's possibly even better is Naruto's almost-identifying with the demon in lines like:
They sit in the dark for a long time, waiting.
At the end he gets to leave. Kyuubi doesn't.
::drools::
Like I said, I'm useless. Umm... yay asuka?