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ext_97868 ([identity profile] aoyagi-rikka.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] askerian 2005-01-28 04:43 am (UTC)

waaaaaaaai it's done! <333333
Now I wanna read the epilogue >.< and sequel(s)?

Nitpick:
The fetus is too small to see anything else right now.
At this stage it's still an embryo, not a fetus. It's not considered a fetus until about two months into the pregnancy. "Baby" or "child" might sound more natural, and is pretty generic.

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