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Elizabeth Culmer ([personal profile] edenfalling) wrote in [personal profile] askerian 2005-01-28 02:40 am (UTC)

*melts into puddle of mush* Eeee! I love love love the way you show all the different pieces of the threesome, how the various twosome pairings work and alter when all three are together. I love your Kakashi and the way he's part of the team (though not part of the whole sex thing). I love Sasuke the pyromaniac. *rereads, then melts again*

Interesting theory on how the seal works. I also really loved the whole 'But you can't be the seal expert; Tsunade respects the seal expert!' bit. SO true of Naruto, Jiraiya, and Tsunade.

One question: what was up with Sasuke asking if Sakura could read their lips? I was under the impression she was listening in to a perfectly audible conversation, and then Tsunade, Jiraiya, et al left the room to meet the Council. Why would she and Sasuke need to read anyone's lips?

Um, and what IS going to happen about the possible wedding? 'Cause they didn't seem married in the KyuuSasu ficlet. But here Naruto seems to be assuming it's a done deal.

Eh, whatever. This is what epilogues are for! :-)

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