*stabinates*

[askerian]

the 2x1 scene in heero's week is not coming. People have been waiting for it for so long, so I feel like it has to be at least mildly interesting. Except I don't know how.

Except by making Duo come too early XD Ah well, they'll do it twice.

Suggestions for interesting sex, people? (excluded: bondage, toys and exotic locations. they're in heero's bed and they're staying there)


Also, I am annoyed in advance by the ffnet reviews i KNOW i will get for this chapter. "AAAH!!! DUO IS PROTECTIVE!!! IT'S TRUE LOVE!!!" "How cute, duo has a crush!!"

Uhm, no. Duo explained why he was protective of Heero, and true love ain't part of that. Yes, he likes him, but no, he doesn't liiiiike him. Yes he's protective and even a little possessive, but he knew Heero before any of the others and he kind of adopted him. Heero's one of his; quatre, to some extend, is one of his, even though Duo's more used to adopting misfits and street rats than polite, well bred, stinking rich young men and he's not that sure how to treat him, and covers it up by keeping the interaction light; Trowa, with his past and his sarcasm, might qualify as one of his, eventually. wufei so far is firmly not one of his.

I bet if I made duo have the exact same behavior, but with Quatre, most of these people would go all "aww, it's so cute, Duo treats Quatre like his baby brother!!" u_u;;;;;

Sadly, if i point that out, and squash the hopes of these people for 1+2 OTPing, I bet they'll stop reading. XD I do believe i've told people there wouldn't be any love matchs in this fic, only friendships and lotsa hot sex, but many of the reviews I get contain at least one variant of "i hope so and so discover that they like each other".

I know i shouldn't want reviews by people who don't quite get the point, but you all know i'm a whore for reviews, and even if that question vaguely annoys me, it still makes my total reviews count climb XD


So, anyway... suggestions for the sex scene? characterisation to develop? scenes you'd like to see in the fic? (yes, i take suggestions. the plot isn't fixed so far, i only have the main lines and a few key scenes. :p)

Comments

suggestion

[(Anonymous)]

Maybe have Heero demonstrate prep on himself with Duo watching... Letting him see how much it "feels kind of good"

*drool*

[windsorblue.livejournal.com]

Y'know, there's nothing wrong with a little fumbling, 'I-don't-know-what-I'm-doing-but-I'm-willing-to-try' type messing around. *nodnod*

And for the record, I'm glad you're not heading for the OTP's in this one. *defiant pose* Unless of course you go for the OT5, in which case, hell yeah. ^__^

Re: suggestion

[askerian]

OOOH. i like the prep idea. *_________* *slobbers* thanks!

[askerian]

*__* heh. good suggestions as well ^^

Well, eventually they'll evolve from fuckbuddies into . uhm. casual fivesome? ~_~

i don't know if they'll end up in love with anyone, and having the five of them in love with the four other guys would be immensely complicated, but sometime after the war, i guess if nothing separates them they can learn to love each other, if not in love. ~__~;;;;;

[windandwater.livejournal.com]

I like the idea of Duo coming too fast. XD Especially since it's implied in Mikke's fic that he DOES. Maybe some mutual masturbation or oral, and Duo comes. Heheheh... then he can be all embarassed and stuff.

I mean, Heero can't just have ALL raging good sex.

[windandwater.livejournal.com]

Rawr... I like the polyamory of all five of them. T___T DON'T DESTROY MY DREAMS, YOU EVIL THING!

[askerian]

yes ma'am. ^^

[askerian]

XDDD write a fic after the war then.

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

Remember, 70%!

[askerian]

XD

[joisbishmyoga.livejournal.com]

I still vote "kissies and grinding until Duo comes early -- oops". Then a second round.

I likies grinding. Is just so frustratingly not-quite-enough. *wicked teeny sadistic streak*

Maybe Heero could get curious as to why Quatre liked giving blowjobs...

[iniq.livejournal.com]

fivesome!

*^_____________^*

*cough* so what? I like it when they all love each other.
It kills all OTP arguments successfully with one strike. It makes everybody (equally) happy, and makes them all have lots and lots of sex... And, most important, it gives lots of opportunity for drama and angst. *^^*

[spotsofcolour.livejournal.com]

You have exactly the sames arguments for it as I do, just substitute drama and angst for more hot sweaty boypile sex and whee!

[spotsofcolour.livejournal.com]

Rargh! *points* I've been trying to find the fic you did for the ides of March think on Sweetly Sour, but it's not working on Sweetly Sour and I can't find it anywhere else! *bounces* Have you got it archived anywhere else? I loved it so...I wanna read it again!

[cailamaia.livejournal.com]

I'll second that!!! *drool* Mmmm...

[spotsofcolour.livejournal.com]

...I opened this comment box thinking 'whee! I can suggest a scene! I can have input! I can feel special!'

and I've just sat here for the past five minutes staring blankly at it oO;;

And y'know, as soon as I get off the computer, something's going to come to me like BAM! and I'll be stuck with it until tomorrow evening, when I'll forget it and it'll start all over again...

[askerian]

S'okay XD i'm not writing tonight, and probably won't tomorrow either. i feel like working on something else, maybe hogwarts strawberries or cloneness.

[spotsofcolour.livejournal.com]

Both also wonderful! *huggles*

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

o_o;; Me? *looks around*

Uhm, well, it's also on my page, here. (http://www.mikkefics.net/fics/ideal.html) You can read it there if you like...

[spotsofcolour.livejournal.com]

*glomps, worships, then runs off to read* Yay! You've just made my day! ((it must be illegal to have a Monday on a Tuesday...))

[morkheleb.livejournal.com]

Hello wonderful lady.

Another proposition could be make Trowa looking (not so) discretly at the two lovers, and let Heero be a show-off. Or you can replace Trowa by Wufei, who can't stop himself about looking.

or maybe all the other gundam boy overlooking.

Or you can make a Duo bruyant at bed (is bruyant correct ?) or breaking the bed, etc.

keep writing, I'm lovin' it ^_^

[askerian]

hehe, bonne idée, mais le voyeurisme ca viendra plus tard. Pour le moment Duo dit qu'il veut se garder heero pour lui tout seul XD par contre l'idée que duo est bruyant ca pourrait être marrant XDDDD

[joisbishmyoga.livejournal.com]

I dunno want "bruyant" means -- vigorous? strong? lively? -- but what if Duo's loud in bed? Hm, needs to be somehow silenced so the others don't wake... a hand, the pillow, a tongue, maybe some bit of clothing to muffle him.

Or, conversely, Duo could be stunningly quiet in bed, all soft moaning and groaning and biting his lip.

Ooh. Biting. Not on purpose, but... no, wait, Quatre's been there done that. Darn.

Hm... rereading Mikkeneko's fic, Heero twines Duo's braid around his hand. Might he do that now, or try and get a "hands off the braid, Yuy" sort of thing?