What you say it's true. In fact most of the threesome fics I've read go from just 1 chapter long to 3 chapters long, and it tends to focus in sex, or other characters point of view (Like Kakashi and his varying traumas, or Hinata, or Sai, etc.) And as I was reading your rant/auto flame?/commentary/thought, I did remember some of the things I found weird in Teamwork, like the weird love balance: Naruto loves more Sakura, who loves more Sasuke, who loves more Naruto, that seems to translate to: Sakura wants to be fucked by Sasuke, who want to be fucked by Naruto, who wants to be fucked by Sakura (Riding? Maybe. I don't know), but that way you don't put Sasuke's need to be male, his pride, and his need to be better or at least equal to Naruto, but you put a lot of Naruto's (And Kyuubi's) lust for Sasuke, he doesn't seem to be willing to be fucked (I think I need to read your fic again, because I think he was willing, if not a bit nervous?). I think Sasuke and Naruto to be equals do need to screw each other, and do the same to poor Sakura. About Sakura, I think you did a good work starting with her. That way we don't start with others fics (And the manga) preconceptions of her, like that she's useless, a cry baby, an obsessive stalker, and a bitch for being how she is to Naruto, and how she is a 'really slow starting' kunoichi because she was following Sasuke around, not training. I like how you made Sakura. She's what the boys lack and that keep them grounded. I like how she's growing a backbone (Or a good pair of...) and is no longer so scared to say and do what she needs, that way she wont be thrown away from the trio, even if Sasuke and Naruto keep their 'little boys club'. I love that Naruto thrives in the love of his teammates, and I feel that his heart is actually growing to love more of Sasuke and the baby, so don't worry about making them feel like they are together only for the situation. Sasuke is also learning to be part of others (Though I feel that sometimes they push too much... He seems to like it?). (I refered to your fic, because I feel the same about pity pairings and the other lot of unbalanced threesomes)
Thank you for your fics (I'm actually regularly stalking your livejournal to see when you get other Naruto ficlet/drable/chapter... <3)
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And as I was reading your rant/auto flame?/commentary/thought, I did remember some of the things I found weird in Teamwork, like the weird love balance: Naruto loves more Sakura, who loves more Sasuke, who loves more Naruto, that seems to translate to: Sakura wants to be fucked by Sasuke, who want to be fucked by Naruto, who wants to be fucked by Sakura (Riding? Maybe. I don't know), but that way you don't put Sasuke's need to be male, his pride, and his need to be better or at least equal to Naruto, but you put a lot of Naruto's (And Kyuubi's) lust for Sasuke, he doesn't seem to be willing to be fucked (I think I need to read your fic again, because I think he was willing, if not a bit nervous?). I think Sasuke and Naruto to be equals do need to screw each other, and do the same to poor Sakura.
About Sakura, I think you did a good work starting with her. That way we don't start with others fics (And the manga) preconceptions of her, like that she's useless, a cry baby, an obsessive stalker, and a bitch for being how she is to Naruto, and how she is a 'really slow starting' kunoichi because she was following Sasuke around, not training. I like how you made Sakura. She's what the boys lack and that keep them grounded. I like how she's growing a backbone (Or a good pair of...) and is no longer so scared to say and do what she needs, that way she wont be thrown away from the trio, even if Sasuke and Naruto keep their 'little boys club'.
I love that Naruto thrives in the love of his teammates, and I feel that his heart is actually growing to love more of Sasuke and the baby, so don't worry about making them feel like they are together only for the situation. Sasuke is also learning to be part of others (Though I feel that sometimes they push too much... He seems to like it?).
(I refered to your fic, because I feel the same about pity pairings and the other lot of unbalanced threesomes)
Thank you for your fics (I'm actually regularly stalking your livejournal to see when you get other Naruto ficlet/drable/chapter... <3)