ext_263291 ([identity profile] okamikaze.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] askerian 2010-08-24 06:44 pm (UTC)

*feels lurved* I'd love the graphic details, and it could work with the mood, but I feel like that would be a challenge. You've done wonderful work with exploring the emotional side of sex, but I can't remember if you've done anything quite like this where the characters are just so vulnerable and serious and wanting to express the love they feel for each other. You could try and make it a side-chapter, but in the main Teamwork canon I think you should leave it out. But that's my humble opinion.

*is petted* You're welcome! Not that I think you noticed, but I've been lurking more than commenting lately, and I wanted to show that I'm still reading your stuff/lurking on your posts, just not posting. Lol lazy okami is lazy.

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