Tue, Mar. 6th, 2007

askerian: (Aske_Mermaids in SPACE)
I realize I need to finish the latest Liadan-POV part I posted, but ehhhn, I still need to figure out plotty stuff first. Anyway, at the moment the main problems I have with this story are in the general plot; I'm not even trying to imagine too many specific scenes just yet.

Writing fanfic has made me totally unable to introduce new characters and places properly. I realize this intro scene is lacking, but I don't have a good grip on Blue's voice yet and I can't come up with ways to describe the characters and settings in a way that doesn't feel like irrelevant info-dumping. Nnngh. ~__~

If anything really needs to be expanded on, please point it out? and if you have a suggestion on where in the scene I could insert it, I will love you forever. (I need to describe Kalden more, for instance. But WHERE can I sneak it in? not a clue.)

Plz also tell me what kind of impression you get from the characters? ;_;

Space Mermaids -- Blue )

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